poem challenge : Lassitude

Hi guys :It's my first time to have a challenge .This challenge is a little hard because some of the words are new so I need to understand their meaning and to use them in sentences.I wrote this poem to take the first step to be a great poet like Shakespeare :) .... kiddingThis is my try :Somebody was nearBut I didn't careHe left me in a bad attitudeNow iam in lassitudeYou were a liarWhen you lit the fireThe fire of love..BTW : Lassitude means tired ...I don't know it's other meaningAn excellent poet ? Huh:D
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  • Thanks Onee for this ♡♡♡.
  • Hi, I'm trying... :)

    I'm glad to see you participate the challenge. Your simply poem is very good. You deliver the message very well. :)

    Btw, lassitude is a noun. So it should be 'Now I am in lassitude' 

    Thank you so much for participating....... I guess Shakespeare is near to you...*kidding. You have a talent in this for sure. Keep it up! ^_^ 

  • Evangeline, :))
    Your words really pleased me♡♡
    Thanks,
  • Risty,, Thank you . Your comment is very supportive:))))
  • AG, Thanks for your nice comment :))))
  • ITTC, not bad for your first time, keep it up. Hope to see you writing some blogs in the future. :)

  • Oh Wow.. 

    "You were a liar
    When you lit the fire
    The fire of love.."

    What a strong words.. it's really a step to Shakespeare :)

  • Serene,, Thanks for your nice comment:) :):)
  • WoW! so nice poem, it can touch heart even being short. Thanks trying change.

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