June and Nile were very good friends. They had many similarities.They even had many common ideas and beliefs. Moreover, their culture was same. One fine morning they decided to get married. They had a very good bond too.
Time passed. Many things happened between them, many differences came up. After 3 years of being together they decided to be separated. They torn their relationship. They broke the vows which they pronounced in their wedding day.
Now, there was hatred instead of love. They envied each other, cherished ill-will. There was no respect, sympathy and sweetness.
Was it inevitable or decided before? Couldn't they avoid it and make it worthy? Strange!
But, despite bitterness, distaste, hard feelings there was still good wishes, respect and liking!
Sounds weird? Maybe but it's true. Even, they both thought it was a strange feelings but couldn't deny. They just couldn't restrain, hold back themselves thinking about each other.
And, yes, finally they had decided to embrace again! Actually in a real relationship there must be a word like ' es-capable' instead of ' irrevocable'.
p.s. I am sure, I did many mistakes, should I hide my face? But, please do corrections!
Comments
Thanks @ Shahara, for stopping by.
@ Smith, thanks and I am sorry to make this error!
@ Alice, thanks a lot for these corrections, seems I will never be able to write flawlessly! Thanks again.
There is always hope in anything as long as we are willing to make sacrifices. A good share Afro!
Corrections:
Even, they even had many common ideas and believes beliefs
They had (a) very good bondage bond too. ( bondage means slavery so it doesn't seem to fit in the context)
Time passed away. After 3 years of (being) togetherness they decided to be parted part ways.
Good effort!
It can be so fun to write this way. By the way, it should be 'antonyms', not 'antonyns' (in this blog's title).
nice story Afro, from strangers become a lovers and become strangers again, its happen in real life
Thanks, Nimzaf and ELF.
nice story..!
It's my pleasure to hear from you, Misha. Really is it Urdhu? I thought it is Hindi. Anyway there are lots of similarities between these two languages. So, hard to define. I understand Hindi can speak little But do I understand urdhu too! As, I know what Dara said....no problem, you are my Bangla teacher..then......opps it is my fault! Let me know, please.
No it was Urdu, what dara said.
Good blog Afro.
You are getting on sound foot.
Oops, meri gulti Afro, I am a bad student Afro!
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