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Breakthrough in My Life..   There's a time when we should move on and go.. There's a time when we should believe and trust.. And there's a time when we can't  do all things.. Caused we lost in our way

Posted by Nut on February 10, 2011

Breakthrough in My Life..

 

There's a time when we should move on and go..

There's a time when we should believe and trust..

And there's a time when we can't  do all things..

Caused we lost in our way..

Losting the way that should to be ours..

The way that will make some breakthrough in our life..

But, if we never think before..

You'll never have anything.. Either breakthrough in your life..

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  • Nut February 12, 2011 3:45
    Bianca ; Thanks for your correction.. It's the first time for me and I need to learn more about english especially grammer.. LOL.. Thank you so much.. About the picture.. I take it from Google.. That's not my picture.. But, I like the picture too.. Sometimes I feel like yours. I wrote it when I'm confused with my way. I'm 16th years old. People say that, " When we teenager we have something like a period of puberty and it's time to search our identity. When that time, I always feel chained and caged. I lost my way. I don't understand why I do something like that? Why I'm mocking my friends?  Why I can't control myself? Why my mood change rapidly, sometimes I'm happy but a minute again I was cry and sad.. And I never understood it! I just want to free. I don't want be chagrined after I do something wrong.. I just want to realize what is right and what is wrong while I was doing something.. Yeah, Mr. Achan: Never give up and Keep struggling too.. Thank's.. For Karenina : Thank's.. Gold Lining? Is it a things? I never found 'till now.. LOL.. Well.. Thank you.. Ybu
  • Achan Malaka February 10, 2011 11:26

    Sadness and happiness have their own time

    Losing your way will make you learn

    To find any other right tracks

    Never give up and keep struggling.

     

    Nice poem, Natalie. I love it :)

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