I thought you were thinking about me
as there were none
Just we were, together
and the rivulet
You looked at me
I thought
the sky also blushed
like me
Later, in the last twilight
I thought
I heard, you uttered my name
and the crickets started buzzing around
But, at the end, there was silence of darkness!
None was there
Only the rivulet!
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Yeah, this "the sky blushed" is the highlight of the poem. So much strong feelings that even the nature was affected. Thanks bet for sharing!
I liked it when said that the sky blushed :)
Awwww:) It is so cute! I just imagined wonderful sunset, that similar to your blushing cheeks:)
And only sound of the rivulet is being heard! Cool! Sorry to know that noone was there...