I saw the flip flops
between the beach and the cascade mountain
in a windy day
once there was a willow tree
and a Neanderthal lady
trying to make a flip flops
many days ago
days passed by
many things happened
but still there is the notation of that time!
Comments
Thanks, kal for stopping by.
Dear bet,
So nice poem.Simple words,but interesting.many thanks for sharing!
Thanks a dear Onee....see what a mess I did with pass away....lol
Anyway wanted to say Neanderthal were the people who lived in per-history Ara.
Hi bet,
Nice to meet you. I'm glad that you join the challenge. :) Very good try and very well using all the words. I like it, also the story in our poem. ^_^ Btw, if you don't mind, I would say 'days passed (by)'. You can also add this mini dics in your blog.
Mini dics:
flip-flop: a type of open shoe, often made of rubber, with a V-shaped strap that goes between the big toe and the toe next to it
willow: a tree that grows near water and has long, thin branches that hang down, or wood from this tree
neanderthal: (of people or beliefs) very old-fashioned and not willing to change.
Thanks a lot for writing. ^_^
Thanks a lot, Marsha.
Thanks, serene!
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