... In the distance, he vaguely sees a girl smiling ...,
It was just a flash back of thoughts, the girl smiling was his wife twenty two years back, he recalled the memory of her, she didn’t change a bit during their long time of marriage, she stayed the same.
How come he got so blind? When did he realize that he forgot to treasure her? How could he forget what a unique woman, wife and mother she was? How could he forget what was the most important in his life, his wife and their two children?
How did he became such a dirty and disgusting person. He felt disgusted by him self. Just because of one temptation, that woman, and it was not just a woman, she was his brothers wife, they had an affair going on for the past four years.
His thoughts was chaos. This happens to a person who sees his entire life laying in ruins.
It is said that when love is pure, it brings forward in persons the very best, but when love is based on inpureness it brings forward in persons ugliness.
That was exactly the way he had treated his wife, he saw how unhappy she was, he saw all her tears, he saw her worrying, she didn’t eat, she didn’t sleep. She begged him every day, she asked him to stop, she even said she was willing to forgive. But he kept laughing at her, he felt invincible, he felt and odd kind of satisfaction seeing her in that much despair.
He felt pleasure seeing her getting more and more insecure, seeing her low confidence, like something was wrong with her, like she was an unattractive woman. She wasn’t.
His wife was in completely shock, the day she discovered what was really going on, all the puzzles felt into place. The woman, she had thought of as her sister, whom she had cared so much for, was secretly ruining her family. That woman whom she had turned to with all her worries, crying, telling her about her suspicion and this woman had asked eagerly “... sister, do you know who is this woman?”
He hadn’t cared about them, they left him, his wife and his two children. They left and never turned back not even to look.
Note:
This is a true life story. It is said that God even forgives hundreds of sins, but humans are only humans, some action or sins are unforgivable.
If another woman steals
your man, there is no
better revenge than letting
her keep him.
Real men can’t be stolen.
Comments
Hello Dear Icha,
So nice to see you around here, and what pleasant surprise to know you was around my post here, thank you sweetie ღ
I agree with all your words expressed, loyalty and trust are priceless and so essential value among any kind of relationship.
Yes, It is really a sad real life story, when a human can be the most ugliest one. But, I know she has a good life, he is the one who lost everything and the most precious thing one earth, he lost his children.
You are welcome, my pleasure to participate in the challenge. Thank you many times for your time and your comment, I appreciate it highly :)
Hello Evangelina,
It is really sad story. I hope never experience like this, and I think everyone, too. The loyalty is the expensive thing in this time, priceless. In the relationship it is the important thing to be had, besides trust.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts as well as answering the writing challenge from Onee.
Hello Dear Onee,
You are welcome.
Sometimes behaviors are difficult to understand, and sometimes actions done by others are so heartless and sneaky, that it leaves a person completely shaken, so is for this story.
No one believed that person could do something like that.
Thank you so much Onee, despite of being busy for taking time reading my post and for making the corrections. I will look through my blog some later and do as you asked.
I really appreciate it, thank you :)
Dear Eva,,
What a great idea! "Memory of his wife". :)) I guess, he has been searching everywhere but never found them. :D
Ops* affair with brother's wife. :| I think woman should have more awareness in this matter.
Well, I know it's not easy to write a story in present tense. It's about timing. The story will be like a movie where it is happening at the moment when we watch it. So, it's about tenses. ^^
If you wish corrections, I would suggest paragraph one and four should be all in simple present tense. That would be clearer in understanding the story as the continuation of my story.
One more correction is about indirect question. "...do you know who this woman is?"
Many many thanks for your entry, for sharing this imagination through a story. I'm really glad to read your continuation. Have a beautiful day! ^_^
Hello bet,
Thank you many times for your kind words, also thank you for for your time reading and commenting, I appreciate it :)
This is for you :)
Hello NotAClue, Estanis and SNR,
Thank you many times to all of you for reading and liking my post :)
Hello Mishaikh,
Yes, it is a very sad side of marriage life, suddenly to realize the person whom you thought you knew well turned out to be a complete stranger, just like wearing a mask.
It was a Pakistani girl living abroad, her parents arranged her marriage and she got married to a guy from Pakistan, he came here to live.
Her in laws tried to manipulate her to stay silent and stay in the marriage, by telling her that such actions are quite normal and happens in all families. They knew what was going on and they didn’t stop it, probably because they thought she too dumb to figure it out.
That persons behavior towards her and the children had been so disgusting over time, that he left back nothing to forgive. He mixed things in their food, like taweez ( Black Magic ), she cried because the children and she was afraid to eat food at home.
But she is a strong, well educated woman, so she left.
Thank you Mishaikh, for taking time reading and committing, I really appreciate it :)
Very well delineated Eva. The character you have described is called "sadist" in Psychiatry.
A very sad side of "real life" (marriage life).
A good piece of story, though sad. Thanks for sharing with us, Eva.