Flip Flops
Walking bare foot on the Road
I am praying to have Flip flops
Seeing shoes in others Foot
I am praying to have Flip flops
though I have good condition
Thank God for all blessings I have
But I am Praying to Have Flip flops too..
Willow
Remember the days
When we Were together
Remember the days
When we used to site under the willow and Play there,
Remember the days
When we used to smile,enjoy with each other
Remember the Days
When we used to ring the bell of neighbor's door and always Run,
Remember the Days
When we used to race while cycling, You always fall down.
Remember the Days
When we used to go to school together
Unforgettable moments I have With you..
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Thanks Onee-Chan For giving me Opportunity to write these above Poems..
Thanks all For Your Precious time.. I really Appreciate..
Comments
Nice poems with beautiful pictures.Thanks for sharing.
Hi Elf!
Both poems are nice. I really enjoy reading them.
My dear sister ELF Noor,
Your poem is too special for me to comment in a rush. I should spend a good time. ;)
Is there really the willow near your place. How nice...! ^^
#Sweetie Onee:
I was getting angry... LOL I was little bit shocked, why Onee is not responding.. :( You can say I was waiting for Your comment.. :P
I always wait to have comment form my Sweet Friends.. ^_^
Onee, I never rung the Bell of neighbor in my childhood.... but this is what, little naughty Kids do.. ^_^ Sitting under any Tree is really pleasant....:) But this is True, I really enjoyed my Childhood with Friends..
thanks for appreciation.
Dearest Eva:
I am really really Happy to have your Comment and appreciation from you.. You know, your appreciation really encourage me write more..:)
I am really glad to have a Friend like you.. ^_^
#Batuhan:
Thanks for your lovely words.. ^_^
Dear ELF Noor sister,
I'm sorry for my belated response. Hope you won't get angry with me dear.. ;)
Your first poem is so natural and catchy. I like this style of yours and the story was so interesting. Walking bare foot on the Road is not too bad. Hope your wish come true girl... :D
Your second poem,, I wonder if you used to ring the bell of neighbor's door and always Run....:D :D But you combine your words very united. Seems the unforgettable moments you have are so fun. Soooo nice and I like it. Keep writing poem. (as you said to me) ^^
To see again, I rarely see this willow at my place. It seems fun to sit there... Btw, do you mean 'sit under the willow?'
You're always welcome and many many thanks for your participation. I expected that.^^
Thanks for Correcting My minor mistakes....^.^
Just see the rhythm I've replaced.
Very good poetic work indeed
Walking bare foot on the Road
I am praying to have Flip flops
Seeing shoes in others’ Feet
I am praying to have Flip flops
I do am blessed with other goods of life
But I am Praying to Have Flip flops too..
Remember the days
When we were together
Remember the days
When we used to sit under the willow and Play
Remember the days
When we used to smile, enjoy with each other
Remember the Days
When we used to ring the bell of neighbor and ran away,
Remember the Days
When we used to race while cycling, I always out you sway.
Remember the Days
When we used to go to school together
Unforgettable moments now have gone away.
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