Estanis, Thank you for your nice comment ,and to tell you the truth I didn't know either that I have such skills;I guess I was feeling a bit nostalgic and that's why I had this unexpected inspiration.
Just Learner, Thank you for reading and for your feedback ! About keeping it up ,we will see :)
Kal, Thank you ! I think that it is a touching poem because I was really having that mood while I was writing it; I mean through those lines I expressed my real feelings at that moment.
Risty, Thank you !!! :) and regarding the words I used they are very simple just as an ”empty broken heart”:)
Dear Lucia, the picture is soooooo cooolll. The composition is a masterpiece for me, you have explicitly stated the details of the broken heart, words are well blended and with a good rhyme.
Though I have no sense of poetry, I love to add that the poetry has unity and meaningful which are kept in mind while composing verses in addition to matching rhyming words. Keep it up
Dear Lucia, I'm not keen on poetry but I must say this of yours moved me. It is very well written with deep feelings. I most like the last strophe with that unique touch of hope.
I didn't know such skill of yours.
Thank you!I am glad you liked it even though I realised after I posted it some mistakes;but what can I do ?:)I am forced to consider them as a challenge in my learning process :)
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Hi dear all,
Estanis,
Thank you for your nice comment ,and to tell you the truth I didn't know either that I have such skills;I guess I was feeling a bit nostalgic and that's why I had this unexpected inspiration.
Just Learner,
Thank you for reading and for your feedback ! About keeping it up ,we will see :)
Kal,
Thank you ! I think that it is a touching poem because I was really having that mood while I was writing it; I mean through those lines I expressed my real feelings at that moment.
Risty,
Thank you !!! :) and regarding the words I used they are very simple just as an ”empty broken heart”:)
Dear Lucia, the picture is soooooo cooolll. The composition is a masterpiece for me, you have explicitly stated the details of the broken heart, words are well blended and with a good rhyme.
Thanks for sharing this Lucia. :)
So heart touching poem.You weaving so great dear,I really like it.Many thanks for sharing!
Though I have no sense of poetry, I love to add that the poetry has unity and meaningful which are kept in mind while composing verses in addition to matching rhyming words. Keep it up
I didn't know such skill of yours.
Chapeau!
Evangelina,
Thank you!I am glad you liked it even though I realised after I posted it some mistakes;but what can I do ?:)I am forced to consider them as a challenge in my learning process :)
Thanks Bet! I will try to keep it up...just that inspiration is not my best friend...it comes just rarely to me:)
Thank you for reading it ,Serene and Shoba!!!...and I am glad you enjoyed it:)
Ops...Onee,I didn't know that I had to use some specific words ...I just thought that I should make up a poem:)Thanks for your feedback!
Hi Lucia,
I enjoyed your fooling around. It's cool! Thanks for sharing.
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