My dear friends,
In my childhood I have learnt a lesson about a blind boy. (In my language – Sinhala) It name “Pure White”. Still remember, that lesson made big hurt for me.So, I have taken the spirit from that lesson to write my poem. I don’t know how many success my word, to describe it.
Someone belie me - Flowers are so nice
They have many colors - why colors unable touches?
Flowers have smell – Like kids so well
And they are soft - Really I know it
Has something light - Why I don’t know it
Please let me know - What are seem and behold
Feel warm day than night - Does it have any different
I know, sunny day hot – Feel rain so cold
I don’t feel much - I’m a boy, little
When I was big - Will it feel a lot?
Mom, why filled tears - I feel flow on cheeks
Don’t cry sweet mom - Just I did jokes
Shall I go to beat? - That boys who told lies
They gave so hurt - Now must have smirk
My world no dark - mom, you are my light
You never give hurt - That’s why you great!
My friend Onee, Many thanks, for your wonderful opportunity!
Comments
Dear Sis, sounds like a poem for your baby, and your touching connection to him. I feel like your sad when writing this, how I wish I'm wrong. :)
Thanks for sharing your poem and joining this challenge. :)
Congratulations and thanks a lot for sharing.
Keep it up :)
Dear Eva,
How much honour? You have commented my poem.As a leaner, always I hope it from persons like you.You have given big courage and strength for me.It's a lot for me dear.Thank you so much your kind words.
My sweet friend Shoba,
I know you always with me.You always make me big courage and strength my dear!Appreciate your kind qualities and very proud to have a friend like you!
Dear Serene,
If did compare with your skills,I'm only a dust dear.But your words make me big strength.Thank you so much and God bless you too my dear!
Dear Saffron,
Many thanks for liking my poem,Appreciate it dear!
Very good attempt, dear Kal. I felt sad when I read your poem and realized how challenging life is for some people. Thank you for sharing.
Heart touching, dear. You have all the quality, painting, blog writing, and wonderful poet, too. May Allah blessed you.
Dear Onee,
01st I got the word"err" that means cheat or belie.I want to say it.Now when I change it, missed your word.And I revised my poem as you mentioned.Thank you very much for the corrections.Highly appreciate it my dear friend.
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