One's poem challenge: Under the table

I saw a label under the table

                      Under the table

I saw a red label!

The red label told me about

A great shop with a big discount

A great shop with a HUGE discount,

The label from which I have found

Under the big wooden table

With six chairs around and a cat was asleep

Under that table, so nicely and deep

The cat was enjoying its lonely sleep.

And I saw children out of the window

They were playing under an old willow ….

And trees were turning green

And summer was almost to be seen!

And birds were singing jolly songs

And people were doing their jobs…

So many things was going on at the moment

                      When I found this red label 

Under the old wooden table!

 

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  • Onee! thanks for reading!! I liked the challenge a lot!

  • Hi Helena,

    Perfect view for a woman! :D And you made the perfect words to describe it. Two thumbsup for you! I really like it. Women's poem. :D

    Thank you so much. I'm glad to see your participation. ^^

  • the red label is gone!!! and guess what?? My shopping is done :D

  • Awesome and cool, my poet :)

    Give me that redish lable,
    it is still stuck on the table! :D
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