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Posted by ELF-Noor on July 8, 2015

Sometimes

I try to talk to you

Like you are listening me,

Sometimes

I just try to listen you

Like you are talking to me,

Sometimes

I try to search you here and there

Like you must be present here for me,

Oh where are you,

Come to see my condition

Talk to me

Listen to me

Give me freedom so that

I could fly again

I could be happy again

I could enjoy again

I wanna live my life openly..

By ELF Noor

8July,2015

correction, diary, prisoner

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Onee-chan July 10, 2015 6:30

Sometimes, we can't do something as other things/people blocked us. But still, there are many ways and hope to reach our dreams. Many people could have the same conditions. Don't let yourself be imprisoned by anything. Keep writing, ELF Noor! Thank you for sharing. :)

If you would to consider this error...

Like you are listening to me,

Sometimes

I just try to listen to you
Grace Ra July 9, 2015 15:48

I wanna live my life openly, nice ELF Noor
Elen July 9, 2015 8:37

Very nice poem Elf Noor! I really liked it!
ELF-Noor July 9, 2015 0:27

#Areality, Setareh, Anah Sid, Amazing thanks thanks a-lot for appropriating my Written Poem..
thanks for stopping here.
Amal July 8, 2015 19:57

Amazing !
setareh July 8, 2015 19:41

Very nice poem. Thanks for sharing.