Once upon a time, there lived a mother with her two daughters. Her husband, the girl's father, passed away soon after the girls birth. He had an accident with his horse in the forest on the way home. He wanted to buy something in the neighboring town, a gift for his wife on the occasion of his children’s birth.
The couple had tried to start a family for a long time, but they had always failed. They had given up, but one day the woman realized that she was not just pregnant but pregnant with twins. It was hard for the woman to lose her beloved husband and to know that her girls would never see their father.
The years went by. The girls grew up and became beauties. Mother was still an attractive woman.
Once, on a cold winter day, outside the house, meter-high snow covered the landscape. The moon shone brightly, and millions of stars in the dark sky. It was nearly midnight when someone knocked on the door. The knocking sounded very loud against the silence of the winter night".
Inside the house, everyone slept deeply. The girls’ little dog slept in its basket at the foot of the bed. Nobody heard the first knock, but the person outside wasn't giving up and continued knocking.
Mother woke up, lit a candle and opened the door.
She was a little shocked by the appearance of a man who was standing at the door. He was almost frozen and looked tired and desperate. His lips were already blue and in his beard hung little icicles.
Although he didn't look well, he had good manners. He apologized several times to the woman because he had knocked so insistently.
"I am so sorry, Madam," he said, "but I don't know where I am. When I fell from my horse, I lost consciousness". When I came to, my horse had disappeared. I called, expecting someone to be there, but there wasn't anyone. So, I started looking for the way out of the wood. Finally, I found a path that led me right to your house."
"Please come in and warm up. I will give you a tea with a shot of rum. You can put on dry clothes from my late husband. You are sodden by the snow," said the woman.
The girls had meanwhile also woken up and helped their mother prepare the tea. Minutes later, the man sat in front of the fireplace, wearing dry clothes and drinking hot tea with rum. With his feet in a tin bowl of hot water, he felt his vital force coming back.
"Who are you and why have you been in the forest so late at night?" asked one of the girls. "I don't know," answered the man. "I cannot remember who I am or where I wanted to go."
"It seems you have lost your memory," said the woman. "But I believe, soon again you will remember who you are and where you live. You can stay here as long as necessary, but only if you agree to sleep on the attic floor. There is a little room. I will make a bed for you."
The man agreed gratefully and soon, everyone slept.
The next morning came, and the man did still not remember who he was.
The days went by. The man's memory had not returned. He helped the family as well as he could. He repaired shaky chairs, he chopped wood for the fireplace, and even helped with cooking and clearing the house.
One day, it was sunny and not as cold as on the previous days. The girls with their sleds went to a nearby hill to have fun. Suddenly they noticed two young horseback riders. They were elegantly dressed and seemed to be a nobleman.
At that time, the twin sisters were 16 years old, and they were still shy in the presence of men, but they took all their courage and asked the men for what they were looking.
"We are the sons of the king of this kingdom," said the young men. "We are looking for our father, the king. He went on a hunt two months ago and never came back. We are worried, and we are very disappointed, and desperate because we have already been looking for him for such a long time, but without success. We love him so much, and he is everything we have. Our mother died when we were little boys. He never married again. We always told him to find a new wife to be happy again, but he never fell in love with anyone."
Both girls became very excited because they realized who the man in their house was. The girls didn't want to tell the young men about their guess: the man could be the father of the young men, the king of the kingdom. So they invited the princes to have a tea in the girls' home. The men felt cold, so they agreed.
The king stood in the kitchen and was looking at the girls' mother while she did housework. He felt a warmth in his belly, and his heart was beating very fast.
“How beautiful she is! She has a compassionate heart, is a good mother, and a respectable woman,” he thought. He had fallen in love with her.
But, could he confess to loving her? He did not know who he was, so he kept silent.
The girls’ mother, too, had butterflies in her belly whenever she saw him.
And both didn't tell each other anything about their feelings.
Suddenly, they heard noises and voices outside. They curiously looked through the window and saw both girls accompanied by two young men.
The king immediately shouted, "Oh my God! Now I know who I am! The young men with your daughters are my sons, and I am the king of this kingdom."
He opened the door, stormed out and with the tears on his cheeks he cordially embraced his sons. He had gotten back his memory. Finally!
After the sons and the king had related their stories to each other, the king confessed to his loving the woman and asked her to marry him and to go with him to his castle. Of course, he wanted both girls to go with them, too.
After a short time, the king and the woman got married. Both girls lived with them and fell in love with the king’s sons. So, when the girls turned 18, two other weddings were celebrated.
And all of them lived happily ever after.
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Thanks so much dear Luci, you make my day !!! ( ... hahaha... after lots of corrections made by Danny. But I am really grateful that he always corrects ... it's always a lot of work for him.)
Your positive criticism is valuable for me because I know you never flatter only... you also would say if my tale were bad. That's better because we learn through our mistakes and sometimes we just think we are talented ... but we aren't. Then is an open word better than wrong compliments. At least I prefer this manner.
I wish you still a nice weekend. And thanks again for your opinion.
Thanks a lot dear Danny, your corrections are very helpful for me. It seems I think too complicated in terms of English grammar. Your corrections did remaind me that we have similare rules of tenses... I mean between German and English... unfortunately I forget it again and again. (Ohhhh my old brain .... hahaha.. sorry I'm just joking ... joking is my way to hide my embarrassment and lack of knowledge. )
Dear Rose! Here are my corrections at last! I hope, I will not spoil your good mood. I can explain your main mistakes for you not to make them in the future. That is how we learn!
Once upon a time there lived a mother with her two daughters. Her husband, their father, passed away soon after the girls had been born. He had an accident with his horse in the forest on his way home. He wanted to buy something in the nearby town, to say it more exactly, he wanted to buy a gift for his wife on the occasion of his kids’ birth. The couple had tried to start a baby for long, but they always failed. They had already given up, but one day the woman recognized that she was pregnant and even with the twins. It was hard for the woman to lose her beloved husband and to realize that her girls would never meet their father.
The years passed and the girls grew up to virtuous beauties and __their mother was still very attractive, too.
Once, it was __very cold winter. Outside the house, the meter-high snow covered the landscape. The moon was shining brightly and million__ stars were gleaming. It was almost midnight when someone knocked on the door.__ Knocking was very loud in the silence of the winter night. Inside the house, everyone was sleeping tight. The girls’ little dog slept in its basket at the foot end of the bed. Nobody heard the first knock
__, but the person outside didn’t give up and knocking again and again.__ Mother woke up, lit a candle and opened the door. She was a little shocked by the appearance of an elder man, who was standing at the door. He was almost frozen and__ looked tired and desperate. His lips were already blue and in his beard hung little icicles. Although he didn't look __ good, __ he had good manners. He apologized again and again to the woman because he had knocked so pushy. "I am so sorry, Madam", he said, "but I don't know where I am. I fell down from my horse and fainted (blacked out). When I came to, my horse ___ disappeared. I called expecting__ someone to be there, but there wasn't anyone. So, I started looking for the way out of the wood. Finally, I found a path has led me right to your house."
"Please come in and warm up. I will make_ tea with a good shot of rum and I will give you dry clothes, you are totally wet from snow" , said the woman.
Meanwhile the girls woke up. They helped her mother to make tea and to look around for some warm clothes. Just some minutes later the man was sitting in front of the fireplace, in dry clothes and was having his hot tea with rum. His feet were sticking in a tin bowl with the hot water and he could feel how his vital force was coming back.
"Who are you and why have you been in the forest so late at night?" asked one of the girls. "I don't know", answered the man. "I cannot remember who I am and where I wanted to go__."
"It seems you lost your memory", said the woman. "But I believe, soon again you will remember who you are and where you live. You can stay here as long as it is necessary, but only if you agree to sleep on the attic floor. There is a little room. I will make a bed for you."
The man agreed gratefully and soon everyone was sleeping.
The next morning came, but the man did not remember yet who he was.
The days passed without his getting his memory back. He helped the small family as good as he could. He repaired shaky chairs, he chopped wood for the fireplace, and even helped with cooking and clearing the house.
One day, it was __ sunny __ and not as cold as on the previous days. The girls with their sleds went to a near hill to have fun. Suddenly they noticed two young horseback riders. They were elegantly dressed and
__ seemed to be of good house.
At that time, the twin sisters were 16 years old and were still very shy in men’s presence. Nevertheless, they asked what the guys were looking for.
"We are the sons of the king of this kingdom," said the young men. "We are looking for our father, the king, he went for a hunt two months ago and has never come back home. We are in worry and we are very disappointed and desperate because we have already been looking for him for such a long time, but without success. We love him so much, he is everything we have. Our mother died when we were little boys. He has never married again. We always told him, he should find a new wife again, to be happy, but he has never fallen in love with anyone."
__Both girls got very excited because they recognized __who the man in their house was, there. But they didn’t want to give false hope in case it wasn't true. So they didn't tell the young men about their conjecture: the man could be the father of the guys and the king of the kingdom. So they invited the princes to have hot tea with them in their house. __Both guys felt cold and so they agreed.
The king was about to help __ mother with her housework. He was standing in the kitchen __ looking at her. He felt__ warm feeling in his belly and how his heart began to beat faster whenever he was close to her. “She is so beautiful, she has a compassionate heart, she is a good mother and a respectable woman,” he thought. Long before he had recognized that he was__ in love with her.
But, could he confess to loving her? He did not know who he was, so he kept silent.
Girls’ mother, too, __had butterflies in her belly whenever she saw him.
And both didn't tell each other anything about their feelings.
Suddenly they__ heard noises and voices outside. They curiously looked through the window and __ saw __ both girls accompanied by two young men.
The king immediately cried: "Oh my god! Now I know who I am.__ Both young men___ with your daughters are my sons and I am the king of this kingdom."
He opened the door, stormed out and with the tears on his cheeks he cordially embraced his sons. He __got back his memory at last.
After the sons and the king had told their stories to each other, the king confessed to his loving the woman and __asked her to marry him and to go with him to his castle. Of course, he wanted __ both girls to go with them, too.
After a short time the king and the woman got married. __ Both girls lived with them and fell in love with the king’s sons. So, when the girls turned 18, two other weddings were celebrated.
And all of them lived long and happily ever after.
Dear Rose! You see, most of your mistakes are grammar ones. You have a good vocabulary and you express your mind very clearly, but grammar rules still exsit. If you improve your grammar, your English will be very good. You shouldn't feel disappointed! If you said what you write, I will miss a half of ypur mistakes as they don't bother me to understand what you mean.
We are expecting severe frost in Ukraine in a day. Will it get to your place, too?
Hahaha, dear Danny, don't worry, you may correct my tale ... (only if you want !) ... because: your correction isn't the reason when I change my good mood. It's just a general disappointment about myself. Sometimes I think that I never will be able to master English very well (omg!!!). But: please no false consideration ... I am able to bear critism and corrections. Who makes mistakes has to carry the consequences... so is life! We learn trough our mistakes ... only .. sometimes I'm afraid that some things don't keep in my brain... hahaha.
Thanks Fra@nk, Mishaikh and Devil for your comments.
I am happy if I could remind you of your childhood. Fairy tales have been a part of our childhood and sometimes it accompanies us during our whole life.
Thank you, dear Rose! A true European tale with the happy end. It reminds me of my childhood, too! I will leave it uncorrected not to spoil your good mood! Hahaha!
Your story made me smile thanks...
Thanks for giving us an opportunity to read "live happily ever after" bed time story. Made me recall my childhood.
Thanks again a lot Rose.