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Oh God! Guide me

Posted by ELF-Noor on June 30, 2015

Oh God!

I do not know what I wants actually

I am losing my ways

I can not see clearly my ways,

Oh God! I know

You are watching everything

You are watching what I am doing and why.

You are there for me,

Oh God! You know

What I wants actually

What will be good for me

What will be better for me,

Oh God! Guide me

Where should I go

What should I do

What decision should I take,

Oh God! Show me

The right direction

The right path

The right decision.

By Elf Noor

30June, 2015

Best wishes for all, Thanks

correction, poem, pray

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ELF-Noor July 6, 2015 4:47

#Areality thanks for appreciating.. many many thanks for wishing..!
ELF-Noor July 4, 2015 2:14

yeah Mishaikh..! i am agree with you.. but once a person know the meaning of peace heart, a person just get the real peace of heart and mind by adapting the right path (SIRAT E MUSTAQEEM).. then i think he/she will never want to be in wrong path, then he/she will always try to be not trap by devil.. thanks for sharing your view here..

May Allah give us Strength to follow a right path in all Condition..Ameen
Mishaikh July 4, 2015 1:36

Yes, I also pray Allah to keep me on the right path. He(Allah) already enlighten for the mankind what is right and what is wrong, but there is NAFS (heart - easy translation) which finds the attraction from the deviation no to the right path. That is why we have been given the Aayat in Sura Fateha.......EHDNAS SIRAT AL MUSTAQEEM (O'Allah guide me to the right path), and we repeat it number of times daily. This is the BLESSING OF ALLAH for all mankind.
ELF-Noor July 3, 2015 19:44

#Setreh i also pray from Allah to keep me in a right path....!

thanks for Appreciating and for comment.
setareh July 3, 2015 8:21

Dear Elf, when I talk to God I always ask him to keep me in the right track. I am holding his hands I ask him please never let my hands go away. Nice writing,thanks for sharing.
ELF-Noor July 1, 2015 3:27

#thanks Mishaikh for correction..

#Alice E. thanks for Appreciating.. and also for correction:)

#Onee-Chan thanks for liking my poetry and also for wishing.. :P thnks for correction..

thanks all for correcting my small mistakes..!
Onee-chan June 30, 2015 7:14

I always like the poem of talking to God. Impressive! Best wishes for you, too. ELF Noor.

Just a small error: You are seeing watching.

Thank you for sharing and considering my improvement.
Alice E. June 30, 2015 5:14

Your words invite attention and reflection Elf Noor! Beautiful poem! :)

Correction: Capitalize your "I" in your sentences
Mishaikh June 30, 2015 4:23

What I want actually.

Nice poetic pray. Amen.