I have tried to write a story based on Exclamative Sentence (exclamation) provided on EC. (You can find the link on your right down below). Let's see how I am successful to entertain you.
How messed up you have made with your life! I warned you it is a fire, it would burn you. Love………. true love does not exist, and if exist it is hard to find. But you didn’t give a heed go my advice. Now, look what a mess you have made! What an idiot I have been wasting energy to advise you. She has gone, left you lingering between reality and imagination. It would have better if you have understood. How strange it was, you didn’t believe me, me your close friend, on the contrary, you believed her, when I knew since the beginning she was just playing with you, with your emotions, just enjoying. You have been a toy for her. You remember when you said, “Wow! What a cool girl she is!” and I told you, that she was not your type, you are so simple, so easy going, her coolness will burn you one day when the game is over. O, how I wish you would have believed me! Hey! That is not a brilliant idea just to lie here cutting yourself from life. What a handsome man you were! And now what a mess you’ve made your life. How quickly you understand this, I can only wish. “O man! Love is not easy, I have always been saying love is a sphere of fire, it incinerates the victim, and there has been no bike which can give you ride through this fire, except wisdom, and it is wise to guard the heart with wisdom.
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Thanks Narin for your time to read and posting comment.
oh mr mishaikh sorry,i didnot read ur first sentences before ur story
nice,tnx for sharing.but what a benefit of all these things one say to that person who is failed in love?nothing except bothering him more.of course at first it is good to warned him as he or she did ,but not later i think
@Lady Anne
I have corrected as advised, m'lady. Thanks.
Have I ever been into this situation? You tell me, what do you think.
How messed up you have made with your life! (This looks better, Mish!)
Turbulent love affair. That's how I would describe his ill-fated relationship. When the heart rules over the mind, that person becomes a victim.
In a teacher's case, it's different. He should always teach with a heart. But I agree with you --"It is always wise to guard the heart with wisdom."
Have you been into that situation before, Mish?
Thanks Diah, I am happy you like it.
What a great story this story is! I like the last line about "wisdom" that can save us from sphere of fire. Somehow, it is wiser if we put logic and feeling towards love in a balanced way, both for men and women.
Thanks Eva for your explanatory comment.
I acknowledge Onee's help in highlighting the sentences.
Mishaikh,
It is said well “ love makes blind” by clever people.
When such feelings make people become zombies completely in disruption because of sorrow and disappointment, that is the saddest part.
True, it is a sad story...,
Very nice attempt and thank you so much for highlighting the exclamative sentences :) Hmm, I find it a little bit difficult exactly to understand their use.
Dara Thanks a lot for your unique comment.
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