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I have tried to write a story based on Exclamative Sentence (exclamation) provided on EC. (You can find the link on your right down below).  Let's see how I am successful to entertain you.

How messed up you have made with your life! I warned you it is a fire, it would burn you.  Love………. true love does not exist, and if exist it is hard to find. But you didn’t give a heed go my advice. Now, look what a mess you have made! What an idiot I have been wasting energy to advise you. She has gone, left you lingering between reality and imagination. It would have better if you have understood.  How strange it was, you didn’t believe me, me your close friend, on the contrary, you believed her, when I knew since the beginning she was just playing with you, with your emotions, just enjoying.  You have been a toy for her. You remember when you said, “Wow! What a cool girl she is!” and I told you, that she was not your type, you are so simple, so easy going, her coolness will burn you one day when the game is over. O, how I wish you would have believed me!  Hey! That is not a brilliant idea just to lie here cutting yourself from life. What a handsome man you were! And now what a mess you’ve made your life.  How quickly you understand this, I can only wish. “O man! Love is not easy, I have always been saying love is a sphere of fire, it incinerates the victim, and there has been no bike which can give you ride through this fire, except wisdom, and it is wise to guard the heart with wisdom.