Life has gone by in describing your name,
Yet, the heart of mine is still full of shame
I am badly entangled in devil's hand
Please save me, my Lord! from devil's game.
He always tries to derail my life's train
The goal I have makes hard for me to gain
He applies all his tricks to make me insane
Please pull me out, my God! from devil's chain.
My Lord! I have very sensitive feeling
I don't know the tricky way of living
People enjoy playing with my feeling
Please hold me, my Lord! I am falling!.
The colour of life has made us blind
It increases selfishness and makes us unkind
The death angel is staring us from behind
Please forgive us, my Lord! and make us kind!
Comments
Sara.h
Thank you for your nice comments
Well, I am very pleased to have received an appreciation from a lady whose country has produced many poets.
Thank you so much for adding your comments.
Thank you so much for leaving your nice comment
Thank you for posting a beautiful image displaying a cute couple praying for something. But in such a tender age what are they praying for? . Usually, it makes me curious when I see teenagers absorbing in their prays.
Thank you so much!
The poetry is the only art which is not taught in any institute. The only way, it can be learned is by reading your most favorite poet as much as possible. So keep reading your most favorite poet with the hope to become a good poet. Nothing is impossible :)
So far as correction is concerned, I will replace that line by this one
" Death angel is staring us from behind
Thank you so much for commenting. I really liked the way you appreciated my scant work.
Words are invisible .So, I have no an exact idea whether they come directly from heart or mind while writing.
Thank you for your appreciation
Honestly speaking, I remain indebted to you for your sincere support forever. Your kindness and politeness with me since the first day of my EC has played a major role to help me write such blogs. You have no idea how much I have learned from you and your discussions.
Yeah this part of poetry represents many readers, but you expressed it on my blog that made me so much happy.
Thank you so much for sharing a great opinions.
Thank you so sharing your opinions.
Thank you for adding "ameen" and sharing your opinion here.
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