News on the end of day

Hello everyone !

I have just read article has title: Disagreement Over Lower Mekong River Dam Project in Laos.

Lao officals are discussing about plan to build dam for hydropower. But, lots of scientist, enviromental activists, foreign politician are concerned about enviroment effects. The dam will disrupt migratory fish and lead to greater water salinity and the washing way of soil.

I hope that enviromental activists, scientists and politicians have right decisions to prevent Mekong Delta' eco-system.

P/s: I only write for practising English writing. My Writing skill isn't good. I hope everyone who read my blog will correct it and give some advices to improve writing skill. Thanks all. Have a good night !

Comments

Thanh December 22, 2014 16:56

Hi @ Anele and everyone !

In the correcting paragraph, you used " would come up with the right decisions....". I wonder why you don't use : will come up with the right decisions....Could you explain this gramar point ?

Thank you so much !
noaslpls December 22, 2014 1:27

Hi Thanh

Welcome to the world of EC bloggers. This is a good start. You're so lucky to have Anele as your teacher. Learn from her. She is one tireless English teacher.
Thanh December 22, 2014 1:21

Thanks Anele for correcting. Thanks to Sathiavathi km, beham for encouraging me.

Have a good day !
Lady Anne December 22, 2014 0:57

By the way, I forgot to add that your title should be "News at the End of the Day".
Sathiavathi km December 21, 2014 22:12

A nice way of improving our English. We are all in the same boat. so go on writing. Good luck
Lady Anne December 21, 2014 20:37

Good way of practising your English. Don't lose hope. Everyone in EC is trying to improve his English so you are not alone. Together, we can make it.

For the corrections:

I have just read an article has title entitled:

Lao officals are discussing about a plan to build a dam for hydropower.

But, lots of scientist, enviromental activists, foreign politician are concerned about the enviroment effects.

I hope that enviromental activists, scientists and politicians have would come up with the right decisions to prevent Mekong Delta' eco-system.

I hope everyone who reads my blog will correct it and give some pieces of advices advice to improve my writing skill.

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Way to go, Thanh.
behnam December 21, 2014 18:22

good luck