Please give me some feedback if my writing is incorrect or some parts need to improve. Thank you.
New Year is fast approaching. I have been measuring myself for personal growth each year because I want to be better Me. There are both joy and unhappiness have come through this year. For that unhappiness, I would keep them to experience and learn from it. Anyway, I would rather let it go in this year and resolve to change in 2019. Thank you all the obstacles to teach me to become strong, calm, collected and focused.
I am crossing my fingers to get good news after the New Year. If I get what I expect, I will shout out here later.
For pursuing my degree, I still keep doing and the progress what I am doing is great. I do it incrementally as I don't want to stress myself. I want to use all the knowledge I am learning for my job in order to apply it efficiently, properly and correctly. That's why I decided to continue my degree not only earn the bachelor but also bring together with knowledge.
The most important for me is I did break my 2018 resolution. I am elated and excited about it because of my first-year resolution. I challenged myself to read 12 books a year. It seems effortless to somebody for this challenge but for some people like I am, I don't read much except for magazines, newspapers, and other articles on the Internet. Have you ever asked yourself how many books you read a year? As I found out, reading keeps your mind active,mentally sharp, enhance your productivity, improve speaking skill, and a ton of benefits which you are up for finding on the Internet. I still keep this challenge on my 2019 resolution but I am going to add it up the challenge. Another plan of this year, I am still continuing doing it in 2019, I cannot say it is explicitly success but I settle evidently for the outcome, for example, I have noticed that my vocabulary is improving largely and also other tasks as well. Therefore, I am still going to keep tracking them in next year.
After all, I look forward to having a great year in 2019, moreover, I hope for both my family and my own family are happy together with healthy. That's all I wish for.
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Thanks for sharing all your hopes and challenging about the past year. Especially , your point of view about the importance of reading books to develop our linguistic and mental skill , which I consider as a benefacial advise for us all here . Sometimes , I think that opening books to read few lines we like is a first step toward becoming good readers .
Secondly , about your request to correct your blog . Let me tell you that , it is written in a good way in general . That's my personal view point . Honestly , I am just like you I need someone to assess my writing . The only correction that I may suggest for you is ((( divid your article into paragraphs which is an essential thing to do )))
Thus , it would be easy to read and comprehend . :) keep blogging
Hi Pöllö!
It's great to realize that we need to do introspection every time. I agree with you that we should improve ourselves to be better and better. Experience teaches a lot.
It's great to know that your vocabulary is improving. Practice more and more, read and write, mistakes will be reduced consequently.
Best wishes to you! Keep writing! :)
Thank you for your sharing
There are slight observations regarding your topic, I shall check them later. For example, writing the main verb after the auxiliary verb. right now, let us go and join the crowd to celebrate the new year. Thanks for your patience.
Suasdee Pollo! I agree with you. Here in Saudi Arabia, we are about less than three minutes for the new year. By the way, is it possible to be one of your friends? Thanks.