Never Will I

Sitting aloneThinking of you,
Your affection ,
Your Devotion, Veneration,
Your Dedication Adhesion,
Your Allegiance ,Diligence &
Reverence,
Your Elocution, Expatiation & Captivation,
Your Megnatization , Elegance & Satiation
Many more to notify
You can forget me
Sure, Never will I

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  • I would like to thanks all the visitors who read my blog poem. Thanks for the such nice and beautiful comments. 

    I will keep trying to improve my words and style as few of visitor suggested. I am also thankful to them for piece of advices. Stay blessed and happy. 

    Regards

  • Thanks Ms Sarah for reading my poem and liking . 

  • Thank you very much Paula for ur such nice comments...sure i will keep on trying to  write  for you  people. Have nice time there

    Regards

  • Hi Zaibi….sorry it took me so long to comment.  It is nice you can describe your thinking with so many words, take care and keep trying!!!!!

  • Very well written Zaibi 

    Keep it up :) 

  • Heart touching poem ZIBI the selection of words are beautiful, happy to read.

  • Good attemp Zaibi.  It is good for a beginner.  Not bad.  With the passage of time maturity grow to follow the rules of literature/poetry.

  • Oi there, folks

       I am apt to agree with Paul's comment as for me, a poem is not just some fancy, random words tossed into a bucket.

      A poem needs to have a rhythm meter, verse foot and rhyme.......The End!

  • your word Approaching the Heart it is so beautiful
  • your word Approaching the Heart it is so beautiful
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