Mysterious city....

Hi Friend,

After a long time I tried to write something of latest happening.Please do correct my mistake and rate my blogs.

There was a big crowd when I went near to the place. Nothing was visible and but colloquial confused sounds heard. Somehow I managed to get in and what I saw was shocking. A man lay on the ground and covered with white plastic poster. With air fluctuation, the covered poster covers and uncovers his body He seemed slaughtered and blood clots were visible in between.

After few min I understand that this person was murdered last night and thrown out at the street. He is identified as an IT professional and a resident of nearby colony. Police had further investigated and found that he is married and have one.. too shocking. In a while his wife and relatives were informed and the place was full of grief.

Since I was one of the spectators of this incident, I keen to take interest in everyday news on air or in newspaper. Around one month passed but no clue, sometimes her wife and family member seemed while interviewed by reports. Not the first time but many such issues reported every day but mostly are unrevealed. This is what happening everyday people anger and greed is a life threat and may lead to death. Why we as human being are involving in such a criminal act which snitches husband, brother or son? As we are developing and having access to latest technology, anger, hatred and ego are growing.

Not sure when this is going to be end but I believe one day it will be when almighty god will remove bad evil from this beautiful world.

Thanks for reading !!

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Regards,

Sanjib

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  • Good job! ,,, thanks for sharing. 

  • Is this a true story, Sanjib?

    Sanjib, here is a humble suggestion by a learner who's just like you. You know, Sanjib, that while writing you mix up different tenses. You should take care of it and you ought to revise the tenses once again, in my humble opinion, so that you may not mix them up.

    There's another humble suggestion and that's you should keep writing as much as you can. It doesn't really matter if you keep making mistakes. Remember, practice makes perfect. The more you write, less you make mistakes.

    Happy learning! :)

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