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My Second Poem

Posted by Arif on July 28, 2015

My friend, Dara ordered me to write a poem. In compliance to his order, :D I would like to share with you second poem I published on MYEC years ago. My first poem you can find on my page. This poem has ambiguity. I wrote it in a craziest style. Let's see how it touches you.

If you support me once I will support you twice
You desert me and so do I.

If you respond me once I will respond you twice
You ignore me and so do I.

if you compromise me once I will compromise you twice
You fight me and so do I.

If you love me once I will love you twice
You hate me and so do I.

This is my latest poem :)

I wrote this poem just for fun 
Please Put down your gun
I just try to brighten your face
The way we're brighten by sun

So, don't it too serious. Enjoy and let me know its test.:)

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  • Arif August 14, 2015 14:55
    My sister you called me "brother" it means "brother" I always say relation of brother and sister is much stronger than friendship. Yes, my life on is short. I wish I could inspire thousand learners ,:)

    Thank you my dearest sister :)
  • Arif August 13, 2015 17:55
    Sorry Keen Learner for being late in replying. Actually, I was bit busy in official matter since morning. Anyway, I will try to inspire you thrice and more times, but unfortunately my life on EC has been too short.

    Thank you so much for commenting.
  • Arif August 13, 2015 5:17
    Dear Onee-chan

    Yes, really it is the craziest one.
    I can't enjoy here by ignoring my dearest sister on this site.

    Thank you so much for commenting
  • Onee-chan August 12, 2015 16:11

    If you care to me once I will care to you twice

    You ignore me....I will haunt you. :D

    Don't you think this is the craziest one? lol

    Thanks for the nice joke, I enjoyed it. :)

  • Arif July 31, 2015 4:10
    Ha ha ha your comment has a very deep message for this poet and others, so let me ponder over it lol.

    Sir, here you can say

    You don't like my post neither do I.

    Thank you so much my friend for adding interesting comments.
  • Arif July 29, 2015 14:44
    Just me i am glad you found easy and attractive words in my poem. Thank you so much for passing by
  • just me July 29, 2015 11:26

    Its nice poem with easy and attraction words .

  • Arif July 29, 2015 8:52
    Setareh, such expression is very common.:)
    So my poem represents yout personality.:)
    Thank you so much for opining on my poem.
  • setareh July 29, 2015 6:43
    Actually I like the idea of loving even our enemies but when it comes to practice your poem would be right about me.:D
  • Arif July 28, 2015 19:13
    Beethoven lol good suggestion
    Let me try right now but unfortunately you miss such a melodious voice lol
    Thank you so much for suggesting :)
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