I wrote this poetry in Sep,2013...
Ab toh darte hai kisi ko apna kehnay say
Jis kobhe hum ne apna kaha wohi hum se bichar gaya
Sep,2013 (by Elf)
Now I fear to call someone mine
whomever I considered mine, parted from me.
Sometime we think all the people whom we love alot; leave us... But the fact is that when we love someone, we start to have too much expectation from them.. and we become mean in this aspect.Then we just think about ourselves.. Everyone indeed has his/her own circle, his/her own goal in life.. No-one can stay with us all the day. So when the person get busy in their life and leave us for a while, we feel hurt and negative thoughts keeps coming in our mind as we have them forever. We very meanly want their availability. If a person closed to us gets preoccupied in the matters of life, it affects us, the wise thing is that we should realize and take the life as it is......!!!!
Comments
#Mishaikh : nice phase.. :) i liked it..
#Onee-chan : cool, thanks for you nice comment.. yeah nothing of us in him/her so we shouldn't feel possessive about him/her..
#angel.. thanks for appreciating..
#Dear Inna : thanks for you kind advice.. yes we can't stop them from leaving us,if take a decision of leaving... then they will leave whether you try to stop them or not.. they just make space for others.. !!
Dear Maya... i am agree with you.. both required to equally love/trust and care of each other in strong relationship.. and male give time only when they are free but fe give time even when they are not free.. sad reality but fe should compromise on it, and male should change their self atleast little bit..
thank for your nice comment.
AAB WOH ROOTHA HAI TO KAAM BOHAT YAAD AAEY (I do not remember first line at the moment)
He's parted, now I remember lots of works to do.
Dear Ratu.. yeah its absolutely right that when somebody left us, then we get hurt alot.. but time not stop, its go on..if one left us the for sure he/she leave a room for somebody else.. thanks for your lovely reply..
Good poetry, ELF! Everything is not ours. Everything is HIM. That's why we should try not to be too possessive to something or person.
Have a nice day, dear ELF. :)
Human beings are liable to possessiveness:))))) Whatever/whoever I love must be mine! Dear ELF, you are not alone in your wish to keep your beloved. Don't worry, life has an endless supply of wonders , so let those go and meet others!
This blog made me realize our great feeling might put someone into a cage of love...without any intention to do it
#Dear Evangelina you are so right.. sometimes we speculate too much instead of communicating... I liked your this sentences.
I wish nobody could leave us.. whom we want with us forever.. !!!
#thanks Saba for your lovely comment..
#Alice E. thanks for Comment.
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