My keychain
The blue one is house key.And the other one is my room key.But you know what, my room door actually was broken.And I never lock my room door.But it's not that so trouble.The most problem is my room door have a noise when I open or close it.That's mean every time when I go outside or comeback inside.My neighbor was know that.But there have a more horrible thing that is in the winter or had a big wind night.Because the wind will blow my door.Oh my god, can you image when you slept and suddenly your room door open with the horrible sound like a hunted house?Some time I will think there have a guys open my door at night.And he want to do something to me. - -aa
And about the two adornments.They are a gift from friends.The rice dumplings is come from a boy.He is my sister's friend.There have a story.But it's a long story.And the other one is come from a girl.It's a cute smiley face.And there have a story too.It's a shot story.When I worked at gas station.Someday a girl came here and bought the oil into her scooter.And she have to pay 85,but she just only have 70.Then she started nervous and said sorry.But it's just 15 dollars.So I tell her :「That's fine. Don't mind.I can help you with that 15 dollars. And give me back next time if you're not forget. 」.And she was came back and give me back the 15 dollars and a smiley face.
I don't know how to use English to write about the underline.If someone know what I mean and how to write in English.Please help me to improve that sentence and all the article.Thanks for reading.
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Hi Tofu,
I'm glad to see that you've getting started to try the writting challenge of Tara's. I didn't try this topic because I have no interesting idea for writing :)
Your idea is good. Just a few mistakes in using English. You should visit Tara's page again here and leave your link in the comment box. Then she would help you to correct the article.
BTW, would you like to take a look at my new blog ? I would appreciate! You may like to do the same with me to get familiar with this place :)