Today I feel better and decide to write something ^^, but now I don't know what I want to write, Learning English is not so easy as I though, maybe I should write a story about our football team in my class, hi hiMy class is a night class so everyone have to work at day, and study at night, I like football very much and make a decision that our class should have a football team, it's not easy, because everyone was busy, very busy, so it take 2 weeks to persuade my friends to join the team and the list of member was 30 at that time.First time practice, almost football member come and play, it's funny because we not play football for a long time, so every 5 minutes we had to change player, and lots of girls in my class come to encourage our spirit, I love them very much ^^ After practice we went to eat and drink together!Second time, just more than 10 players come to practice, because everyone was busy after the final exam on this semester! but with 10 members we can not play so we invite another team to play with our, and this match end with the final score is 6 - 4, too ashamed :(Third time, I come and realize that just 6 of us was there, "where's the others?" I asked, oh God, almost member came home to spend their holiday time with family because after the exam we have 3 weeks holiday, and this time we have to invite other team again to play with.Now, I have a good news that all my friends come back and ready to play football :D I feel very happy and maybe I can dream about our victory in the future:P
Great writing and very nice organization! Thanks for sharing your story.
The use of "almost" is one "common error" that learners make often: "almost football members"
When you mean "not all" you need to say/write "almost all"
Examples:
1. "Almost all" of the football members came
2. He finished "almost all" of his dinner.
3. I answered "almost all" of the answers correctly.
You can say:
I am "almost" finished my homework.
We were "almost" ready.
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I'm trying to improve my English writing ^^
Thanks again!
The use of "almost" is one "common error" that learners make often: "almost football members"
When you mean "not all" you need to say/write "almost all"
Examples:
1. "Almost all" of the football members came
2. He finished "almost all" of his dinner.
3. I answered "almost all" of the answers correctly.
You can say:
I am "almost" finished my homework.
We were "almost" ready.
Have you ever playing football :D