I just came back from applying a driving licence. It seems that today It is not my day. I walked into the department and pressed a queue ticket. The officer ran to me and said If you came for applying a driving licence, Please came back tomorrow because our system was fallen.
I am a bit disappointed but It means, i will have time to review a written test 1 more day.
Please advise my egnlish writing. thank you so much for correcting me.
^_^
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Anele, thank you so much for your correction. ^_^
I just came back from applying for a driving driver's license. It seems that today It is not my day. I walked into the department and pressed a queue ticket. The officer ran to me and said told me that If you I came for to applying a driving licence, to apply for the driver's license, I have to come Please came back tomorrow because our their system was has fallen.
I am a bit disappointed but It means, i will have time to review a written test 1 more for one day.
Please advise me with regards to my English writing. Thank you so much for correcting me.
Hi Mohammad
thank you for your correction. Dont worry, i am appreciated with a correction. ^_^
You have gotten good result from the circumstance which was occurred. In fact I'm not a teacher, I'm an English learner in EC, but there are some probable mistakes which I detected them:
1- The second "it" in the first line of your text, must be removed.
2- both "came" in third line, should converted to come.
3- i will have time to review a written test 1 day more.
4- Please advise me about my English writing.