My favourite place is my hometown which is called Eskişehir. I grew up until four years old in my village which is called Turkmen-Tokat village in Eskişehir. After that my family moved city center because of my father's job. Every semester and summer vacation I used to go to our village with my sisters. Generally we used to stay at our grandmother's home with our uncle and cousin (mother's side). When we went to village in summer,we used to go to lake to swim and catch fish. Sometimes we used to start a fire then cooked our fish. When we went to village in semester,we used to play snowball between two team. My team members are my two sisters whose names are in turn Ayşe and Imran. Other teams members are my cousins whose names are in turn Muzaffer,Meryem and Tamer. We used to make a big and large wall with snow before we play snowball. We used to play snowball until our hands is cold. Sometimes we used to try to make a snow hole together. After that we used to get in home and change our clothes. When we stayed at home we generally used to watch carton movie and play kids games. My uncle had lots of sheeps and we used to run after them in garden. Also he had a very big dog like a lion and we were very afraid of it. The dog used to guard his sheeps from wolf. My uncle died after I went to military service and my cousin whose name's Muzaffer moved Germany. We couldn't meet together after this incident. I sometimes talk on the phone with them.
If you all find any mistake. Just say me.
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No, i didn't find any other mistake. I am not perfect in English but i think you don't have any other mistake. Ohh, yes, i just found one, you should leave space after comma :)
Thanks a lot folks!
Elen also thanks for your advice.
I will notice after that. Did you find any mistake ? Is that all?
Hey Thunder :) I think many children would envy you for this wonderful childhood you had. You reminded mine, as with my brothers we were going vacations to my aunt in a village. She had a dog, hens and a goat. But you were luckier than me because you had the lake and i envy you for that :)
I noticed these:
My family moved to the city center...
...we used to go to the lake to catch fish.
... between two teams.
...moved to Germany.
Keep writing beautiful blogs!
When we talk about our childhood and wonderful moments that we had with our siblings it will bring smile on our face then we say ' good old days'. Nice writing!
Hi Thunder,
Nice description, it seems you had an unforgetable moment with your relatives and family as well. And you are trying to share your beautiful memories with us. Not everyone has it.
Thanks for sharing your nice story here :)
I really enjoyed.