This is on the motivation of Tanya's writing challenge.
This is also in response to Expector's writing challenge, because it pertains the reported as well as direct narration.
LONESOME:
The twilight was in the offing, (it had already started getting dark), when I started driving to the beach. I moved towards the rock where I was used to sitting. No, I do not get scared if the darkness even prevail the atmosphere, I rather feel close to the Nature. That day I was in gloom, (without any reason, and it is usual for me, I do not need any reason to be sad or happy). I heard the wind blowing as if it had started crying seeing me in gloom. I wanted to sit on the rock and to watch the white stripe on the horizon. It had not gotten dark yet. As the sheet of the darkness was getting thicker, the stars became brighter and brighter. I stared at the stars, as I wanted to find a special one, the one belonged to me, the one created for me.
"Why isn’t there any one for me. My heart is full of love, full of warmth but inside I am still lonely. Why I am lonely in the crowd of all human species wandering on the beach, and now drifting away because it is getting dark. May be they are afraid of darkness, but why I like it. May be because it hides me from the eyes of the onlookers."
It was getting cold and before I started freezing, I stood up and moved where my car was parked. I immediately got into the car, the atmosphere inside started to warming me up. I started feeling relaxed. I did not know when I reached home, fell on the bed and got asleep.
Comments
Thanks DIMI!
Peppo!
Very true your comments are! Thanks!!
sewar,
I have learnt in analysis of literature that a good writer is the one when describes emotions, he makes it universal, emotions of every individual. Your tears indicate that it has touched your inner feelings.
This is the award which any writer can hope for, wish for.
Thanks a lot.
Thanks sewar your once again appreciation of my writing. I will remember your advice.
Oh my God........Your topic gave me moments of silence. The words took me ,immediately, to that beach only with my tears. I don't know why I forgot to take my smiles instead!!! My friend,...........Oh my God, I feel that my words betrayed me. I am out of words, now. Any way, I honestly think that; every one of us has his or her dark room stuck into his or her soul. But remember my friend, do your best to not take its shadow with you any where you intend to go. Otherwise, its darkness would not only obsess you, but also it would obsess every one be around you. My best wishes for you.
Dear Misaikh, Sir.
I am sorry for my belated comment.
The first paragraph remind me of Prophet Adam Alaihissalam. I wonder if he was feeling that way before eve was created from his ribs. The empty heart strangely only could be filled by someone, would it be content by the nature? I think that's different thing, between alone with nature and stay with our soulmate. But if we could have both, it would be perfect, isn't it?
Anyway my congratulations for your great achievement, hats off!!! and stay awesome :)
wow you got your milestone! congratulations
Very well commented Risty Aven. I miss your comments on rest of my blogs.
Dear Mishaikh, I missed the chance to see your 1-299 when it stills hot, however, 300th is a very good one. For me, we need to combat loneliness using a productive outlet, I tried to divert my energy in things/stuff that I love to do. though like you, I'm a loner,but it is also an opportunity for me to learn more and to think about my plans for myself and for my family. That's the perfect time for me to have a self-assessment. Thanks for this relaxed blog,impressive. God bless!
Sulung
Thanks for explaining the feeling of loneliness.
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