moments of togetherness .....

The days we lived together will cherish my memory forever.

We took steps together, sometime you shorten, sometime me to be in alignment.

Your humble and polite voice is still whispering.

your mesmerizing eyes and tender smile will alive in me.

I admire and have a great trust in you.

Believe me, my feelings are pious and don’t tell me it’s silly.

I appraise your capability, you will touch zenith one day.

I rejoice being an observer and giver.

Lastly, I extend my helping hand and grasp you in moment you need.

Thanks for reading.Please please comment on this post..I would appreciate if you rate my blogs and identify my mistakes ...I will further works towards improvement...

Thanks again !!

You need to be a member of MyEnglishClub to add comments!

Join MyEnglishClub

Comments

Daniel July 25, 2015 2:24

Good job Sanjib. Keep it up! It's a great idea have pleasing poems like yours here on MyEC's pages.
sanjib July 20, 2015 11:17

Thanks for your wonderful comment!!

I will take care of all the mistakes.
bet July 16, 2015 10:22

Keep writing.
Alice E. July 16, 2015 5:43

Sanjib, your words are dynamically full of the possibilities one can do for love! Great poem! :)

If I may correct this: The days we lived together I will cherish in the (my) memory forever.

Believe me, (my) feelings are pious

and grasp (you) in (the) moment of (your) need.
setareh July 16, 2015 4:38

Dear Sanjib, your writing sounds to have rhyme like a poem. I am not so good at English to correct your mistakes. I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing so you can improve your writing. Best wishes.

This reply was deleted.