Missing You
You are far away ,
But You are too close in mind, in my Heart.
You can't talk to me,
But Your memory can talk to me.
You are Around me,
I am feeling your Hands around me.
I am not alone,
You are with me.
Nobody's love can be equal to your love,
Nobody can take care of me as You took care of me.
Nobody can replace you,
Though Someone can hold new position at Your place,
But Your place will always be yours in my heart.
For Someone Special, who is not with me, Even not in this World but in My heart....
Comments
#Sweet Onee:
Thanks for such motivational comment.. :)
Hugs! ^_^
#Dear Peppo:
:) Your comment brought smile on my Face..
Where are you now a day..-_-
#Dalas:
Really nice to know that you liked it..^ ^
Dear Elf Noor,.
What a lovely poem you shared. Thank you for kindly share it with us. Somehow everyone could feel the same feeling^^
Anyway, if you feel she is around, indeed she is. That's what I believe. so, Cheer up, Okay?! ;)
Dear ELF,
You made it again. Beautiful poem! I hope it won't make you sad.
Stay happy and be blessed! Hug! ^^
You are Right, "how to carry them in our heart and keep walking". That's what I am doing..
It is ok, sometimes we close eyes from the reality..Everyone has his/her own battle of life.. Life is short, we should live it happily...
I am glad you liked it..
#Dear Valentina,
Read your fav. Poetry with concentration, then try to write...
"I must be strong and carry on", Nice song with touchy and sad lyrics..
many many thanks.. Thanks for appreciation..
There is Small poet present in each person, you just need to try to write or think in a poetics way..
I always try to put my thoughts in words or short blogs, then I feel relax..
Thanks for encouraging me..
#LUCI dear,
It is ok,I know that Everything happens for a reason. But sometimes we don't have courage to accept the reality..
Thanks for appreciation..
Thanks for appreciation..
Yes, It is my "Mother"..
Dara Sir,
Thanks for your Comment,
She is a rare person for Everyone..
Hi again, dear ELF-Noor... I promised to write soon, but I can't gather together my thoughts. They are jumping and mixing with feelings, emotions, pain, reminiscences... They are fighting with tears and trying to dull heartache. I have something to share with you, have something to say, but I really need some time to calm down.
And what about your poem, I like it. You described your feelings beautifully. Your poem is short and complete. It sounds, it moves and though there's pain in it - I don't see despair here. And it is very good. It should be so. Never give way to despair. Everything on the Earth has its time. Limited time. And we must be strong and carry on like it is said in Eric Clapton's song (perhaps you know that he wrote it after his four-year-old son's death https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JxPj3GAYYZ0). And, you know, the best pictures, the best poems, the best music and even the most beautiful buildings were created by those who suffered much. So, take care, dear, and carry on.
I am really sorry for your loss...
Actually it is true that we never heal from our wounds... They stay with us for ever.. we only l arn how to carry them in outlr hearts and keep walking..
I read very nice feelings in the poem..
Thanks for sharing :)
Hello Elf-Noor! Your thoughts made a very nice poem. Actually I don't really like poems, but when I read such touching words, I envy the writer and I wish I could write something similar.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts about your special person... :)
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