My Lucky Star...
Star, Oh my lucky star
Reachin' something like you are
Wouldn't you give me your celestial smile
For I promise someday I'll be your lyre...
Tell me where shall I start
With goals set in the pad of my heart
The journey that holds dear to me
Could you make it clearer for me to see...
Leave trace, oh dear, please
A hint of sparkling lace of breeze
And if the clouds must hide you
Draw a tiny light on the dew
I'll count it as your mystique secret code
That'll guide me even in the most rocky road
To secure me to follow through
'Till one day I sit closer next to you...
Comments
Thank you dear Asma..:)
Awesome.
Dear Addel, my friend, thanks for appreciating my poem.
Actually, this poem is all about my dreams in life. My dreams in life are simple. But it's like a star that sometimes you can't see it blinking in the sky at night. So I lost hope sometimes. But I wish it leaves trace that even I can't see it sometimes it's still there. I still hope the light in the dew that even it's small it'd still reflect the slight hope that even in times losing sight of your own star it has a resemblance in other things where you can draw up your courage and determination to carry on, no matter what condition you face. You still hold this dream in your heart for you know it's just there waiting for you.:)
Sounds dramatic? well..hehehe..sometimes..I'm like that! Out of this world creature. I'm E.T. you know.
Dear Ate Anele,
I can see that you're very romantic person....and how wonderful those words are!..the day when that star goes down and sits closer to me here( ang pagbaba ng tala). Oh how I wish it'd happen!
Thanks ate..
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