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I have decided to write some part of my life of English. Well my English is not satisfactory but I want to try…there is a lot thing that I like to write about. The life was for me different always, because we often changed the place. However I always tried to make the best of my life emmm I think you can change your life always. It does not matter how old you are.I remember when I was 9 years old, I was learning with my best friend biology in her home in Tehran. At that time I began to like the Subject and I tried to understand what she was learning about. I was to child and young to decide something, but I don’t know the reason why I decided to will a doctor (lol). I don’t know why!! but until now I want to be a doctor! emm…who know!? The time changed and I changed so I can´t say what I will in future.And now…I am living In Germany, here is everything very different…The culture, language, people..., and here are many disadvantages and benefits like other countries. The teenagers take the life very easy; they dance in the rain, cherish the moment, ignore the pain, Live, laugh love, Forgive & forget. Well I think some part of them is good. Every time I sit back and think about life. I realize wow I only have a little bit of time to live, you never know when you are going to die and it could be today, tomorrow or in 70 years, so I try to live life to the fullest, that doesn’t mean I have to be a party girl or flirt with every guy, it means I have to do what I want and have fun doing it ….BUT If you have some goal, you can´t take everything easy!!! That’s why I think, I can´t think like “Germany…teenager”!!!However,the time gone so quickly…! I was on the “Deutzer “Bridge it was impossible one year is over…I saw how the people told “happy new year” to each other and drunk beer, Champaign … gave hand, kiss hug. Well I have changed, I’ve grown up :P, I realized how to forgive and forget…I realized how much more peaceful and happy and unstressful my life is. I haven´t reach my target…but I know that I will.
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  • Hi Nafis:)
    First of all thanks a lot for corrected my TeXt I am so glad that u did it for me :)
    emm I don´t know I hope I get my target.....sometimes I get upset ( If I do something fals)I dont know!!!
    thank you again....:X
  • Dear Nicole,

    I think we should see the life of successful people not superficial friends. In my opinion the main reason of life is happiness and we should be happy in all conditions. I think you did not waste anytime because you have learned a lot of things and now, you can reach your goal better than before. I think the universe will show us who we should be. So, be proud of your past and be hopeful.

    Dear Nicole, I corrected some part of your very nice and touching story. Hope you don't mind and don't make you upset. Here is the corrections:

    I have decided to write some parts of my life in English. Well, I am not good at English but I want to try…there is a lot of things that I like to write about. The life was always different for me because we often moved from our place to somewhere else. However, I always tried to make the best of my life. Emmm I think you can always change your life . It does not matter how old you are.
    I remember when I was 9 years old, I was learning biology with my best friend in her home in Tehran,Iran. At that time, I began to like the Subject and I tried to understand what she was learning about. Since my childhood I decided to be a doctor (lol). I don’t know why!! but until now, I want to be a doctor! emm…who knows!? Time has changed and I am changed as well so I can´t say what will happen in the future.
    And now,I am living In Germany. Here everything is different.The culture, the language,the people and etc, and living in Germany has many advantages and disadvantages like other countries. The teenagers take the life very easy; They dance in the rain, cherish the moment, ignore the pain, live, laugh, love, forgive and forget. Well, I think some part of this is good. Every time I sit back and think about life, I realize, I only have a little bit of time to live. You never know when you die and it could be today, tomorrow or in 70 years, so I try to live my life to the fullest.Tthat doesn’t mean I have to be a party girl or flirt with every guy. It means I have to do what I want to and have fun doing it, but If you have some goal, you can´t take everything easy!!! That’s why I think, I can´t think like “German teenagers”!!!
    However, time has passed so quickly…! I was on the “Deutzer “Bridge. It was unbelievable one year has been over…I saw how the people told “Happy new year” to each other and drunk beer, Champaign … gave hand, kissed and huged. Well, I have changed. I am grown up. I realized how to forgive and forget.I realized how much peaceful ,happy and unstressful my life is. I haven´t reach my goal yet but, I know I will.

    Good luck,
    Wishing you well,
    Nafis
  • Well I will be happy and grateful if u write my mistake and ur idea :)
    your nicole
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