I saw her that morning..

She was dancing again with her long red dress on..

She was beautiful like a red rose blossomed in a field of thorns..

I wanted to come closer by her..

Her shining beauty was attracting my eyes..

She was burning in my veins..

With her reddish face.. I saw a bit shyness and a wide grieve.. 

She was thirsty for drinking my tears..

I wanted to touch her body..

While she was passing by my dead soul..

I wanted to smell the rose that was tied on her hair..

She was moving her eyes far from my own..

But her heart was playing games with mine..

Her fragrance was piercing my senses..

She was moving her body, so that It could be at my sight..

She was approaching..

Approaching till I could grab her into my hands..

Then getting far so I could cry my tear away from her eyes.. 

She was still sad because of my departure..

She has been always fighting her tears with this dance at my grave..

She refused to believe that she could not see me any more.. 

But I still can see her from my place..

I can still smell her body and play with her long hair..

My soul has not left our home since I died...

But she was not able to hear my voice when I called her..

She was in pain..

She was in a deep pain that only me.. could understand it.. 

She is dancing again.. 

I am holding her body to my soul for one more dance.. 

We are happy.. 

We are very happy at this moment.. 

But she was in a real pain.. 

My story behind the picture's Challenge, By Luci.

Votes: 0
E-mail me when people leave their comments –

You need to be a member of MyEnglishClub to add comments!

Join MyEnglishClub

Comments

  • OmG, O. M.

    Thank you so much for your encouraging comment. I appreciate your words so much :) I believe that your words are much higher than my humble writings :) 

    Thank you Dear ELF-NoorRosemaryElen or your nice words :) 

  • AWESOOOOME..!!!

    Am just speechless because you have written this blog very nicely....^_^

  • I just found out your talent :P

    Congratulations!! Amazing, awesome, superb!!

    These few words from me. :) I could say more but sorry, I can't stay here more because of my eyes :)

  • Thank you so much for your nice comments dear Bill Vortz & valentina :)

    valentina, The numbers of likes and comments do not express necessarily the quality of the post.. 

    Really thanks for your support :) 

    Bill Vortz's Page
    Bill Vortz's Page on MyEnglishClub
  • I'm really shocked: 47 views and only 3 likes?! I think they just lacked for words to express their admiration and were too much impressed to push the like-button. Good job, AG! Where did you get your inspiration and imagination? A fabulous story!

  • Such a brilliant description of the picture, so dark with a glamorous temptation. I really love your style. Well done, AG :)

  • Luci & Rose :) 

    Thank you for your nice words.. to be honest, I even didn't expect myself :P

  • Dear AG:  Just only one single word:  A W E S O M E !!!
    I don't have any other words.

  • Oh myyyyy!!!! THIS IS REALLY AWESOME PIECE WRITTEN BY YOU! Seriously I love it and didn't expect sth like this! AG, you should write more!!!
This reply was deleted.