Coming back with the memories. I'd like to dig into the grave of the EC's hidden history that might not be known or recognized by many especially new members here..
Once upon a time and just 6 years ago, I published a poem here under the title of "Morbid Love". Later I was very surprised by a very brilliant reply from Ohnie. Ohnie replied my lines wearing the character of the second partner in the blog..
Today, I read a poem written by Shey. Immediately I remembered Ohnie and her blog.. So, I decided to do the same thing that Ohnie once did to me..
So, here it goes my reply to Shey's blog
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She : Once upon a time I loved you.
He: that time, I loved you more and still.
She: You didn't love me.
He: You were so silly not to realize my love.
She: I was blind with love
He: you were really blind not to see my return love.
She: You didn't see my eyes.
He: I didn't see anything but your eyes.
She: I had a 5 years journey
He: I still remember how wonderful that time was :)
She: I met you twice every year
He: I was counting the seconds and moments for our meeting.
She: Now.... you are silent like a rock.
He: your love makes me hurtfully speechless.
She: I am finding you..... why do you refuse me ???
He: You still do not realize that I refuse to enjoy the life without you but not you..
She: If you say a reason it will be easy me to make prepare my wedding ring.
He: Again I am speechless of your love.
She: You have a silent heart.
He: Yes, I do.. And it's full of you..
She: It hurts me a lot.
He: it hurts me more if you know.
She: A love of a poor girl.
He: it's my best honor in life.
She: You never see till you like me.
He: you don't know that It's all what I see.
She: If you don't love me.
He: Look into my eyes and you will see my love..
She: Why you can't tell it direct?
He: Coz, I want you to look into my eyes and see it.
She:If you hate me.
He: I hate my life when you are far away.
She: Why don't you tell it loud.
He: OK.. I HATE MY LIFE WHEN YOU ARE FAR AWAY.
She: Silent is not an answer..........
He: What can I do to make you hear me.
She: Love is waiting till I die.
He: Love is waiting till I die.
She: shining ring is waiting there.
He: There is no ring like my heart shining there into your finger.
She: I will marry him bcz of you.
He: I will love you till I die.
She: YOU stay my heart and hurt me ......
He: I don't wanna see you hurt again..
Comments
valentina :D
Thank you for your comment.. your words always make me happy :)
Well, I agree with you that even myself in real life, sometimes I hurt people who I love.. and I couldn't tell them that I love them really.. it's happening between me and my father :(
unfortunately, especially my family I can not tell them what I feel towards them, because I used to look like strong personality for them that I am not used to show the soft side of my personality.. but I am sure they knew it that the only thing I care about in the world is their happiness..
your words really touch me.. Thank you so much, Dear Valentina.. Love and appreciation are back to you too :)
Words don't come easy to me, how can I find the way to make you see I love you? Words don't come easy...(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q9y5eY1hKuE)
Your poem reminded me this nice old song...
I believe that Shey's touching poem is based on her true feelings and I wish the object of her love was not silent and speechless, I wish he could find the words similar to yours, AG:) Your idea is great. In real life, people mostly suffer because they (lovers, spouses, parents and children, brothers and sisters, friends) can't speak about their feelings. We suffer ourselves and hurt each other, though we love each other. On St. Valentine's Eve I wish to everybody true love not only for one day but for all life. Love and inspiration to you, AG!
Risty Aven,
Love or die.. what is your choice :D hehehehehehe, it sounds really a good idea.. I would like to watch a movie of it..
ELF-Noor,
Thank you for reading and liking it :)
Please send me the link of your work when you do it :D
Looking forward to reading your own :)
Estanis, :D
Thank you for reading and reacting :D
Well, I can only say that the most dangerous reader is that who tries to dig into the backgrounds :D hehehehe.. poetry is poetry, man... and it's not really good in my opinion unless it has much of exaggeration and lying :P
Well, I don't really imagine that it has been 6 years.. I really carry a sweet memory of here.. my salutation to you and to those who I stopped seeing them here.. I wonder what life does to them after this time..
Luci,
you know what :D your reaction to it makes me really proud for I succeeded to convey the scene in the dialogue as if it was real :D
That reminds me of myself when I watched the "TITANIC" movie for the first time... at the end and after three hours of supporting the main character, he died out of freezing -_- I was really provoked and I really wanted to punch "Rose" in her face for jumping back to the ship and causing him death at the end..
hehehehehehe.. that means the best of drama is when it gives you this feeling of provocation and makes you react to it as if it was real :D
Thanks for your reaction.. It is making me laugh again and again each time :D
Seeker,
It's nice to see you here again :) Actually, it's creative yes.. but I learnt it from Ohnie as you can see :D So, salutation to our absent heroine :D
Peppo, nice to see you here :)
So, we can say that you are the only one who agreed with the way that went in the poem :)
That's nice.. At least you could feel it in my unsaid words :D
thanks for your comment again :)
Icha, welcome and thanks for your comment :)
to be honest, in the beginning all what I wanted to do is to reply the poem line by line.. but when I made it I realized it was a really perfect conversation.. I really liked that.. and believe me if I was asked to write a conversation, I suspect that I could not do it XD
And by the way, I still laugh each time I read the comment of Luci :D
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