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Love in contrast

Posted by Mishaikh on May 2, 2016

Eva's 

Writing Challenge - Contrasting words,

Love in contrast:

It made no difference between night and day for me since I fell in love with you. You must see that it is my blind love.  Be sure that I am not going to drag your name to mud by publicizing my love.  But the fact is like snow white. On the contrary I find myself unable even to express before you.  There is a burden on my heart. To those who think in black-and-white terms, my love may be either entirely good or entirely bad for you. When you know you may think or be advised by your closed ones that I am not suitable for you. Okay! I let it be silent, and do not make any fuss.  But want you to know that I love you.  

Note: Above short story is only a fiction.

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  • Mishaikh May 8, 2016 4:06

    Abiba:

    Eva didn't mean just to stick to the pairs of words she listed.  We can also  use  our own inclusive of them.

    Thanks a lot abiba for the giving such a honour...........I am just a learner.

  • Mishaikh May 8, 2016 4:02

    Thanks Usra for the comment.

  • ELF-Noor May 7, 2016 20:45
    As usually you have wrote awesome blog..
    I really liked it..
  • Mishaikh May 5, 2016 7:07

    Peppo:

    It is higher than 10% in my case.  Thanks a lot Peppo.

  • Mishaikh May 5, 2016 7:06

    Thanks Usra for liking my blog.

  • Mishaikh May 5, 2016 7:06

    Onee:

    It is very hard to find a true couple (like true love).  Sure they are there all the places, but hard to find.  All the couples who pass and have passed their life TOGETHER in 'sun and shade' and see/seen their children grow and struggle for life,  they are true couple.  "Togetherness" is the importance.

  • Peppo May 4, 2016 8:15

    hmm, I heard that a fiction contain at least 10% of the writer's experience. How about you, sir? How many percent are you? :D

  • Onee-chan May 4, 2016 6:45

    I'm just saying that I may be happier if you write about the love of a true couple. ^_^

    You're most welcome, dear Mishaikh.

  • Mishaikh May 4, 2016 6:17

    Thanks Onee for your appreciation.  

  • Onee-chan May 4, 2016 5:46

    Dear Mishaikh,

    Of course I knew it. But my earnest request here was you can write the story about you and your dear beloved ones more than this stray thought, as you said before. :))

    Thank you for your reply. I hope you don't mind with my comment, it's just my honesty. You're a TRUE blogger here. :)

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