long for you(poem I made)

poem I made

 

I stayed all my long night

looking for any light

but I can't see ,,because you aren't here with me

I have nothing to do

just loving you

I'm so bleak..so weak...without you

I become more sensitive than before

the strong woman is no more

just looking around

seeing your face ups and down

hearing your voice every where

searching for you,but you aren't there

I returned back to my bed

you still here in my head

I feel you on my lips

through darkness time slips

you breath on my neck

my heart a torn wreck

I hear you whispering in my ear

I feel you so near

although you aren't here

I touch you right now

but I don't know how?????????

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  • good it gives me inspire sense
  • Hi, whatever your name is!

    Definitely you seem to have already experienced 'a real love', as you know the real meaning of 'love', and also your poem has such a true feeling even seemingly in poetic descriptions & expressions

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