poem I made
I stayed all my long night
looking for any light
but I can't see ,,because you aren't here with me
I have nothing to do
just loving you
I'm so bleak..so weak...without you
I become more sensitive than before
the strong woman is no more
just looking around
seeing your face ups and down
hearing your voice every where
searching for you,but you aren't there
I returned back to my bed
you still here in my head
I feel you on my lips
through darkness time slips
you breath on my neck
my heart a torn wreck
I hear you whispering in my ear
I feel you so near
although you aren't here
I touch you right now
but I don't know how?????????
Comments
Hi, whatever your name is!
Definitely you seem to have already experienced 'a real love', as you know the real meaning of 'love', and also your poem has such a true feeling even seemingly in poetic descriptions & expressions