Did you saw film “ Life in a day”? If no, you must see it. It’s wonderful film. This film is no action, no comedy, no drama, it show people… really people, around the world… it show us, and show that we are different and identical in our happiness, our fears, our lifes… It show one day of our life – 24th july 2010. The film is 94 minutes 57 seconds long and includes scenes from 4,500 hours of footage in 80,000 submissions from 140 nations.
(Maybe this post was wrote with mistakes, you can show me where I am wrong)
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Sounds like a fun film - I'll try to watch it. Thanks for sharing.
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