Hellooo,.
How are you everyone? First let me apologize for not doing this when I started to blog here. Many of you may have no idea who I am. Second, I am so grateful for admins and members here for welcoming me, make some correction about my blog, leave a sweet comment and click like on it. So, let me introduce myself.
My user name is Peppo, given by my brother. This is a character from “Gankutsuou”, an anime based on classic France’s novel, his favorite one, “La Conte De Monte Cristo” by Alexander Dumas. A teaser girl he thought suit me well even though I am no longer flirty. This year I am going to be 24 years old and I want my graduation announcement become my birthday present. My major in university is English education, more specific for teenage learners. This is my last year – I hope so- and I teach student privately in my own course.
I was working in a garment factory as labourer after graduate from high school. One year later I continued my study, studying and working at same time. That time I became an admin of a delivery office until I resigned last year because I want to focus on studying and teaching. At first I have no idea about English. Little by little I learn and get to know English better. Besides studying from books, I use internet as well, watching English movies, listening music, playing online games and joining sites where I can improve my skills.
I love reading, especially fiction. Then I got interested with classic literature and fairy tales when studying. Lately I like to read my syntax book and the newest book my teacher send me, Phrasal Verbs and Idioms. By join this site, I wish I can improve my writing skill and make a good friendship with other members.
I think that’s all from me. I would like to read any comment and correction from you. Have a great day.
Comments
Nice introduction !
Hello Peppo nice to know you
Happy to see your comment.
I am happy you know this literature. The story is great, right? Hehe...
Peppo nice to meet you.... just keep writing...!!!
Great! Thanks for the self-introduction!
I hope others will do so. Re corrections: Can you improve this sentence? 'Besides study from books, I use internet as well, watching English movies, listening music, playing online games and join sites where I can improve my skills.' - Tips: 'Besides' can be used as a preposition, so you should use the '-ing' form instead of a base form of a verb after a preposition. And, you should have used 'joining' instead of 'join'. 'Parallel' is a very important rule in English writing - 'doing, doing, doing..', not 'doing, doing, do...'.
I have read its English version, "The Count of Monte Cristo". This had been teaching in our intermediate classes.
I didn't find any major error in your text.
Your 'First and second" seems correct.
Let me check again.
I did read your writing challenge to introduce. So I made this.
Thanks for the idea and comment here :)