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Is she a fool?

Posted by Rose on April 27, 2019

Sometimes she feels like living someone else's life.
Although looking at herself, it's as if she sees a stranger.
She sees someone who is lost.
She sees someone whose thoughts and actions do not match.
Everything she does she does for others.
She acts on reason, but her heart starves, and her soul weeps.
She knows her needs exactly but does not demand anything for herself.


Is she her own prisoner? A prisoner in a cage she made herself?
How could it come this far?
Why doesn't she try to escape?
Why doesn't she change anything?


She still believes in love.
She doesn't give up.


Is she a fool?

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  • Olivia November 4, 2019 0:01

    Wow I liked it so much .. is it written by you??

    • Rose > Olivia November 4, 2019 8:06

      Thanks so much for your nice comment.

      Yes, it is my own writing.

      In my blog, you find only posts written by me. few  exceptions i have mentioned by their sources.

  • Laura n Dana1 August 2, 2019 4:57

    It would be bored for me to live without English.  English ideas help me have possitive thoughts and good energy. Learning English might be one of resting place to me. Thank you for sharing your writing.

  • Fizzy June 4, 2019 3:35

    if she believe, i dont think she is a fool  ^^

  • Rose June 3, 2019 20:54

    Thanks for your comment and the verse of this song.
    It's lovely.

    Thanks. Sanjay.

     

  • Sanjay June 3, 2019 15:53

    I see these thoughts in a song like this, because according to the thought, life gets stronger. 

    Sanjay

  • Sanjay June 3, 2019 15:48

    But I also know my faith and that in us there is strength
    So I tell myself, there's no giving up
    Long as I got a heart inside, until the day I die
    I still believe in crazy love, whoa oh oh, woah oh oh
    I still beleive in crazy love, yeah..................

    Its very loving Song Rose....

    Sanjay

    from India

  • Rose May 1, 2019 15:14

    Your comments are always delightful, dear Mishaikh.
    You are a real poet.
    Thanks for being so considerate.

  • Mishaikh May 1, 2019 14:10

    Beautiful @Rose. I would like to comment:

    There was no light as dim as my heart

    Dwelled the surrounding, but vacant my heart.

  • Rose May 1, 2019 12:57

    Hi, arif.

    I think I have to clarify something because you seem to have misunderstood me.

    Firstly:
    When I wrote 'As if she sees a stranger, I did not mean she sees another human being. She sees herself as if she was a stranger and she is watching her.

    And last:
    When "I wrote She still believes in love" it just expresses her trust in the love, no matter what happens.

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