Sometimes she feels like living someone else's life.
Although looking at herself, it's as if she sees a stranger.
She sees someone who is lost.
She sees someone whose thoughts and actions do not match.
Everything she does she does for others.
She acts on reason, but her heart starves, and her soul weeps.
She knows her needs exactly but does not demand anything for herself.
Is she her own prisoner? A prisoner in a cage she made herself?
How could it come this far?
Why doesn't she try to escape?
Why doesn't she change anything?
She still believes in love.
She doesn't give up.
Is she a fool?
Comments
A great work, A free style written poem, reftecting the inners of a woman /girl and finding herself in a wrong place and love , struggling herself to escape from this bad emotions .probably she loves another one but impossible to reach him... A German form poem.... Am I right ???
Oh, no, Adriano. It is not a poem at all. Just some thoughts.
You can find some poems written by me in my blog...if you are interested in reading them.
To your comment...you are a good reader between the lines. Thanks so much.
I think there is a close likeness between mine and yours. The inner thoughts and misgiving are alike. Very sensitive lines,Rose.
Hey, tawfeeq, even I like your poem. ;) Your words are very touching, and written with great style. Thx for sharing!
A great work and as good as the poem of Rose Irıs....this poem also is reflecting the same emotions with is she fool ? main theme is deep love but unfeasible between two lovers.. !!! A Farsi form of Poem was written in English.. harmony of each lines are really good.... This poem is backed with a good designed background ,to show the importance of this poem...
Thank you Adriano for reading and commenting. You always encourage me a lot.
Hello Tawfeeq.
Your poem is superbly written and full of romance, despite its serious background at the beginning.
Choosing the title "The Fifth Season" is just great and fitting. I think each of us lives in his own fifth season, though many are unaware of it.
Thank you for your kind comment and for adding your poem to my humble post.
If you had posted your poem as a post, members would certainly like to read and comment on it.
Rose, your lines expressed well the depth of sadness. Truly, it fired my inspiration. It is very generous of you to read my comments and add your notes.
Tawfeeq, it isn't generousness. Reading and replying to comments is my pleasure and also a duty to me. I think that should be our normal behavior when we see someone's comments on our posts.
Love never falls I believe in that I know and I see that love maybe sometimes hurtful but it is only thing that makes us alive
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