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In that night

Posted by salah gammaa on March 29, 2018

(In that night) is a famous Sudanese song. I wanted the members to feel those who get the blow in the tank. Getting the blow in the tank is very dangerous. it means explosion and it means the end of life for some. Someone loved a girl and someone else married her. Please enjoy reading

In that night, it was not easy for me

I could not forgive you or blame you

You took all the wounds and the smile

I came to congratulate you and shake hands

I extended my hands without any talk

Because I could not stand in front of you

I came back blocking my tears

In that night,

the people are sharing your joy

I felt I was a stranger there and you are a stranger in my world

I really felt the meaning of separation

I saw the tears behind the eyelashes 

Suppressed by sorrow and loss

The trembling of that palm was saying goodbye

 

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  • salah gammaa April 1, 2018 5:11

    Ne bud mila dama, Svetlana. Don't be, lovely lady. Most love stories have unhappy endings. Don't be sad, because lovely ones are not supposed to. Thanks, Lana for your comment on that poem.  

  • salah gammaa April 1, 2018 5:07

    isho tse Roman?  Nemaya vinwy. I agree with you, everything is connected with war is very sad. Thanks for your comment on that poem.   

  • salah gammaa April 1, 2018 4:57

    Shin aljao ya Warda? hilba wa bahi! Thanks, Warda for your nice and lovely encouraging words. I really appreciate it and I hope you help me to improve my Lybian dialect soon. Thanks for your comment on that poem.

  • Royal Falcon March 31, 2018 5:09

    aray wah DARA ,,,sir 

    ap to chupay rustum niklay ,,,,ap ny to waki kamal hi kr dia,,,, awesome

    really interesting one 

    btw ,,,,thanks for sharing it

  • Mishaikh March 31, 2018 4:19

    Nice, sad and gloomy.

    Dara Thanks for sharing.

  • Svitlana March 30, 2018 11:28

    So sad. (( I hate wars. (( Regrettably, our country is still at war.
    I wish all people to live in peace and never feel sadness of separation.

    • salah gammaa > Svitlana August 1, 2020 12:44

      Spastibo Svitlana! The war is over in our country. Now, we have our war for the chair. Separation is not good. Thanks, Lana for your comment on that poem.

  • Roman March 29, 2018 19:11

    Yes, that is sad.

    And everything, that connected with "war" is sad.

  • Warda March 29, 2018 16:28

    What a heartbreaking and emotional song. I totally could feel the pain of a heartbroken person. 

    Very well translated and portrayed the feelings of a broken heart. 

    I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. 

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