Story About My Painting - In Front of the Door (Shoeless Story In Yemen)

I had told this story somewhere else, but still it is my favourite story ever told to people. Once, I was spending my break in Old Sana’a, Yemen, where I came across with some events. I stayed in a tower house in a place called Az Zumar, which is really old. Some says it has already being 400 years.

There is a street in front of the house which not bigger than an alley. There is where I always saw a kid waiting for me to come out from the big wooden door.

And there he is…the story goes like this.

There was a kid, at his 6. Told me his name is Abdullah. Staying across the street of Az Zumar. Always there waiting. By the front door of the tower house. Waiting in smile.

As azan heard calling for prayer, he knew I will come down from my 5th floor, to walk down to the mosque. He will be waiting by the door. To join for a walk for prayer. Walking in smile.

There it goes every time. He will be waiting, as muazin is calling. Always in smile. Me too, will be expecting him to be standing there each time I opened up the door. He will be waiting to join for a walk.


BUT I noticed something. I saw his bare foot. Every step every beat, walking without shoe. Every time and every day. Abdullah is walking on his bare foot. I dared to ask him about it. He said he don’t have one. Abdullah is shoeless every time and every day.

One day I took him to a stall in the Souk and get him a pair of which he wished to has, by the tag of 600 rial (US4). Abdullah keeps on smiling. I thought it was the end.


But tomorrow he was shoeless again. I demand a reason. He told in smile; the shoe was too nice and hardly suit on him. He went to exchange with his buddy, for a toy of helicopter, which he thought is doing better for him.

I released my breath and said fine; let’s get a cheaper one so that you can’t exchange it with another toy.

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As the day goes by, it was time for me to leave. The last day in Sana’a, and time has come to get back to normal life.

With all my stuffs, I opened up the big wooden door. Abdullah was there in front of door. I told him "al-youm soufa arjig ila biladi"(I'm going back to my country). He replied "Fin?"(where's your country). I told him about where I came from, and he asked me is it somewhere in Saudi Arabia? "La, aba'id min Saudia-ba'id jiddan" (It's further than Saudi, far beyond). He asked; is there any other places further than Saudi Arabia? I keep in silent as I didn't know how to describe it.

He asked me; am I coming back anyway? "attamanni bizalik" I replied (let's hope I would).

As I am leaving, I turned back and saw Abdullah with his new shoe. Hoping he would not be shoeless again. Yet Abdullah keep smiling.


I bet, he will stay in dim minded imaging where on earth is the place I came from.

I bet, he will still there waiting by the door the next day, wishing I would come out from the door.

That is the ‘shoeless story in Sana’a’ all about. Chill….

 

Grossary:

Sana’a = capital city of Yemen

Azan = call for prayer

Muazin = the man who call for prayer

Tower house = type of house in Yemen

Souk = market

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  • @Zahra, thanks for viewing. Actual fact, I was really sad to leave Abdullah. But he keeps on smiling.

    But one thing I noticed, people like this, they can't give priority to the right thing. i.e in spite of getting a shoe, he wants a toy. Well, maybe a toy is a need for him too. 

    Anyway, that place shown me a lot of new things. From that time, when I travel, I would like to find something of 'more down to earth things'. Well...maybe you have your own story to share. Chill...

  • Hi.

    I enjoyed reading the blog post, though I always feel unhappy figuring out there are lots of "Abdullah"s out here. I hope that we all can do our parts in the case of the poor. Yet, I can say that there are many poor people who, in spite of not having their very first needs, have a big kind heart which let them smile in the time of difficulties. On the contrary, many others who can satisfy their very essential needs, can not smile even in the time of happiness and success. Life is so sophisticated sometimes.

    :)

    Thanks for sharing the story along with the very beautiful attachment; I mean your nice painting, and the happy face of that child.

    Have a nice time.

    :)

  • Hi Knight, at least there is something over here for your to view. Visit my page...I have a lot more there; each of them has their own story. Chill...

  • @mayumi:everybody has beautiful heart

    @Sandeep: Sounds like karma-good people will always meet good people in their life

    @Somita: Where is the rose and desert over here?

    @Pearl: That's what makes Sana'a authentic and unique than other places. It is like a big epic movie set, feeling like living in a movie. :)

  • @N Naim, Mostly in the public schools, Kids study in the afternoon. That's because the huge number of students. The elder kids, high school, study in the morning in the same school. =)

    BTW- Living in Old Sana'a is a pretty different from others places. People in Old Sana'a still have their own traditional life style. =)

  • Nice story and nice painting brother! Good people always find good people in their life. That always happens and will always be.

    Cheers! Thumbs up to you. :)

  • You have a beautiful heart!...

  • @Rema: I like it short and sweet when telling story. Because me too, cant stand reading longer story....If i cant write, I will just draw it.

    @piaopiaocike: The is kindness in every of us.

    @nida: Life is always interesting and wonderful depends on how we perceive.

    Thanks for viewing and commenting, I really like to share with others; things happened in my life.

  • @Deuce: Everybody is talented by their own way. I like to tell stories based on true events. It just sometimes I struggled to figure out how to put them in words.

    @Pearl: I wonder if Yemeni kids go to school. I always saw them playing all the time. But I knew, some of the kids need to spend most of their time looking for clean water for their family. I guess it is a normal view to see kids queuing waiting for turn to get clean water from public taps around Sana'a. But one thing- the kid love taking pictures!

  • Interesting story as always. The painting is also wonderful.

    Thanks a lot for sharing.

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