In an iota of a moment julia thought she loved him! ''Is it possible or a good decision to fall in love with a stranger? But, what I can do? He is just so handsome and what is say, eye catching. Even it seems tough to take my eyes off him.''
''Hey, Juli, what are you doing over there? Come here and join us. It's time to get back.''
''Get back, oh, no, shit! I just want to stay here for some time. Want to see him. Did he notice me? Am I looking beautiful today? Uff, I think, by this time, my hair became tangles!''
'' Hey, girl, come on. Why are you going to close to the sea in this late evening? Wanna take a bath?''
''No, never. I just want to deep down with his thoughts, by his lovely smile, why is he so beautiful?''
That man came with two kids. They were playing on the edge of the water, laughing. He was laughing too. And, julia was dieing.
''Yes, he looked at me, impressive and elegant!''
Time passed by, time to get back. Isn't always necessary to say or express the way we feel. Sometimes, it is good if we preserve something with us like a treasure. On the way back, Julia kept remembering the way he smiled at her. Was it at her, no, not at all. It was a nice smile from a nice man to be remembered!
Comments
nice.. keep writing.!
Thanks, misha for corrections.
off him (from is superfluous)
.............deep down in his thoughts....................
..........kept remembering (or remembered).....................
Nice short story.
Kimon acho Afro! Valo achi tum? Me fikir piar nahi deka. They say, love is blind. Is that true Afro?