If I can flow, like a river, through the dry lands,
That didn’t feel wetness since a long time….
If I can be cooked, like a rice bowl in a hut secretly,
The rice couldn’t be cooked….
If I can stay, like a smile on the lips of kids,
That forgot the smile….
If I can bloom, like flowers on the trees,
That everyone can be able to pluck them….
If I can sleep, as a true sweet dream, in the eyes,
That never had a good sleep.….
If I can sing a song like a bird on the door by door,
That the world can be able to wake up….
If I can spread love, as a loving mother to the hearts,
That who never felt love….
If I can be a wish light, in the dark hearts,
That has a hopeless tomorrow….
(I got the spirit of my poem from a most popular song in my country. And it sings, songstress, Hon.Mrs. Nanda Malini)
My dear friends,
I can write poems in my mother language. But I’m no good at English. Though, I wanted to say something that heartfelt. Please forgive me for my wrong grammar and appreciate if you can correct them.
Thank in advance for reading.
(My dear Eva, When I seeing your video, I felt more hurt.I’m thankful you. Cause, You are the person who inspired me to weave this post.)
Comments
Dear AG,
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback.I'm always happy to see your comments.
My dear Rosemary,
Always you are encouraging learners.And highly appreciate your feedback.Your words made me a lot.Thank you so much, sweet friend!
Dear Estanis,
Thank you so much, for the praise my friend.Always your comments make me happy.Highly appreciate for visiting.
These words say a lot about your personality. Thanks a lot for writing. Keep it up :)
Sweet Ella,
Thank you so much, for liking my poem.
Dear Mr.Mishaikh,
I'm so happy to see your comment.Your words made me big courage and strength.Thank you so much and highly appreciating.
And always hope your kindly help.
Sweet Rahul Bhai,
Thank a lot for the feedback.Highly appreciating dear!
Dear Rose,
I know you are a great poetess.Such a person has commented my poem.I'm so happy. Thank you very much for your kind feedback.
Highly appreciating and always hope your help.
Dear sis, Laboni,
Thank you so much for your lovely comment.Highly appreciating dear!
Dear sweet Luci,
After seeing sir Dara's and yours comments I learnt again active and passive sentences related 'can' and 'could'.Thank you so much, my dear.You have taught me a good lesson. Now I can understand the difference between them.
Really, I always feel hesitation to write something as same as chat and speak.Because I've learned English since childhood.But didn't have chances to use it.I think useless is a big fault to the improvement.
Thank you so much again, dear.I always hope and appreciate your help.
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