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I watch the moon

Posted by Rose on November 9, 2016

I watch the moon

Awake at night
I look at sky
the song of stars
my lullaby.

I watch the moon
since he did rise
it has your face
and loving eyes

I watch the moon
I close my eyes
you call my name
I hear your voice

I watch the moon
and feel your kiss
so deep inside
how much I miss

I see the moon
and hear its song
from love it sings
where I belong

I see the moon,
it's clear to me
I'll wait for you
and you for me.

Oh moon on sky
 do strengthen me
I see the light
the worries flee.

The song of moon
it fills the room
but I can see
the sun comes soon.

I'm not afraid
moon comes next night
I'll be awake
to see its light.

To see its light,
it fills my room
I hear its song
I watch the moon.

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  • Rose November 14, 2016 12:15

    Dear Soto bhai, I know, this night we can see the SUPER MOON. I was watching the weather forecast for my region and we will have a star clear night. So I can see this rarely event... if I'm not wrong, then we can see it only every 70 years.

    And thanks a lot again for your comment on my poem.

  • Rose November 12, 2016 16:47

    Of course ... I don't mind, dear Danny. Go ahead please!

  • Rose November 12, 2016 16:20

    Dear Danny, it would be a great honor for me, so I don't mind. Just one condition I have: I want to listen to the song after you will have finished composing.

    Don't you have any corrections on my grammar? I will assume that you accept my mistakes as kind of artistic freedom of the author.

    Thanks ... and I'm looking forward to listen to the song.

  • ELF-Noor November 11, 2016 8:34
    Really nice poem with deep thoughts..
  • Rose November 11, 2016 7:38

    thanks so much

  • Rose November 11, 2016 7:38

    comments like yours are the best wage for someone who writes a poem

  • Kal November 11, 2016 7:33

    Dear Rose,

    You carried me along a beautiful dream.Many thanks.2643770940?profile=original

  • Mishaikh November 11, 2016 6:28

    Rose, 

    http://www.myenglishclub.com/profiles/blogs/the-moon

    This on the inspiration taken from your poem.  I am grateful to you.

    The Moon
    This is on the inspiration taken from Rose’s poem “I Watch the Moon” Thanks Rose. Once again the same night, the same room, the same bed and the same…
  • Rose November 10, 2016 7:37

    Thanks for your comment Mishaikh... I appreciate your opninion very much.

  • Mishaikh November 10, 2016 6:34

    This is waiting of a lover for beloved.

    This is remember of a lover the love of beloved.

    Very touchy....................love as always.

    Thanks!

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