Hi everyone, my name is Scarlett. I have a big problem now.
Today, I received from one friend so many comment about my grammar, he said "that's too bad, you have no any progress in English grammar" . I'm really disappointed with it. I'm very confusing, How to improve my grammar? I practice grammar in some sites on internet, but, maybe have not any improve about it.
How to use it smoothly in write, in chat and all...
How to write the paragraph with right tense, structure, and the connect words? very difficult to get it.
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I'm really hope to receive your guides dear all my friends in MyEC! Please correct my paragraph above..
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This is the correction of teacher Anele. I want to send her my deeply gratitude.
Hi everyone, my name is Scarlett. I have a big problem now.
Today, I received from one friend so many comments about my grammar. He said "that's too bad, you have no any progress in English grammar" . I'm really disappointed with it. I'm very confusing confused. How will I to improve my grammar? I practice grammar in some sites on the internet, but, maybe have not any improved at all about it.
How to use it smoothly in writing, in chatting and all...?
How to write the paragraph with the right tenses, structure, and the connecting words?It's very difficult to get it.
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I'm really hope hoping to receive your guides dear all my friends in MyEC! Please correct my paragraph above..
Comments
Oh Sis, I missed your comment so long time. =((
Hahaha... How lovely your son is!!! that's why I fell in love with him...LOL...
You are very good in punishing some one by your silence ... :S I fear silence too, but sometime, It comes to me in unconscious, often in angry.... :P
OMG....I cannot stop laughing...Yes, I look like that photo. Because, kekeke...maybe you can see...my eyes are too big and "deep". My nose is high...hahaha...when I get angry... of course...a witch is my good name....
hhhh...not only words. I gave them some rods. They must lie down....Poor them...I hit them, but no cry. My son...hahaha...He told....: " Mom, you can hit me , I can stand your rods but please talk to me" (I mean : When I get angry then I stop talking. If I'm quiet....He fears and hurt....hahaha....He is so lovely, right Sis? )
Hahaha... OMG..., poor your baby....he must be very like the toys. :D
But, I appreciate your way! you are quite right! we have to keep our kids in the right way to become mature in future, I can see your kids are very good and talent. How can you do that? Hmm... I'm worry a little, so, did you beat your kids? or just give us some angry words?
Ohhhhh, let me imagine, if it's true.... maybe you look like this pic when you angry with them.... hahaha
And thank for your promise....Love you dear...
OMG...CAT. ...let me laugh....
Well, now, I'm serious. My room is empty. Would you like to come with me? Ohhhh.....room in the "psycho hospital" hahaha....come...hurry up.
Yes, I'm very hard. My kids fear me. You know, in the New society, if we (mom) don't be careful then our Kids will become "bad babies" soon. So I and my hubby never indulge my kids. You know, it's funny. When I took my son come to the super market. He never ask me any toy. He said : "Mom, let me stay here (toy shop). I promised you I just take a look. I won't ask you to buy it" .hahaha....and the sale-woman...lol...she even didn't care about him (because she knew she couldn't buy her toy)....
Oh Sis.... hahaha you are witch? OMG... How can you become Witch, hmmm you must be punish your kids always right? thus, they call you like that..... poor my Sis...hahaha. Lion is the nice nickname dear! your hubby is very wise to put it to you, it seems very suit! hahaha........
Oh Goshhhh... in your pic which you sent me, no, I'm not fat like that, maybe I had just swallowed a big thing...LOL... ya, I need some days for digest it....yum yum... :P
Okay! let's make a deal, you are always my dearest Mouse Sis :) nothing can change it... what will you say?
Have a funny time dear! :D
hahaha....Oh, Cat....You know, this morning, when I sign in EC. Reading your comment and Anau and Butter....OMG....My hubby thought : "I (his wife) am crazy. He was surprise...I laughed loud...
Bear is lovely, Don't you? As my hubby...Goshhh, He calls me : lion. My Kids call me : a witch. Ya, only you....kekeke....you gave me a nice nick name : mouse...I love it so much. So in future...Promise me, nothing change your mind...promise??? hahaha.....
Lovely Cat. But I'm sure....she is your youngest Sis. You like this...
hahaha...heyy, you should go on diet.......
Sis Jerry ...... :P
Hehe.... perhap, Nickname Cat is suitable for me, two friends in EC (include you) and some here -in my place give me, but my BF... he call me bear... :D :D :D
But I (Cat) don't look like your pic :P
I have not fangs... :X You can see me like
hehehe... lovely cat!
Sis CAT....
You can see...Cat is easy than Scar, right? And Cat is always cute than mouse. No doubt. I hate mouse. (I just love Mouse Jerry). So who gave you this nick name? ohhhh...Gosh, don't say me it's from your BF...hahaha....What does his mean? He thinks : You're a lovely CAT or You're cruel CAT like this:
hahaha...where is your teeth?
Oh, my MOUSE sis!!!!!!!
Hahaha... It's accidental in the nickname you give me, because it's same with my nickname I received from my friends in my place...:D .... Ok, and then you will become my MOUSE sis, hahaha....
I understand your mean dear, you are right, Learning can not be in hurry... we have to keep practicing always... Thank you very much for your comment dear my MOUSE sis...hahaha