This is on an inspiration:
With my eyes full of hope and my heart full of love
I’m waiting for you.
Till my last breath and crack of my voice
I’m waiting for you.
I give the beat of my heart to wind and voice to the breeze
To take my message to you.
O waiting crow of my death, eat all my flash but eyes
Where there is hope and the waiting of my love
As they are looking for my beloved
Till the end of my breath.
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Hello Mishaikh,
Thank you for sharing this information. I also remember you replied my once telling about a song in a movie about the crow :)
Eva, so this is/was just an inspiration. This is a very famous poetic lines commonly recited in both Indo/Pak. The Native Language of the rhyme is called Purabi (spoken in certain India's Village areas). As I mentioned in my original blog, once I saw a crow on my way to work, eating from trash, this rhyme was revived in my mind and I wrote it. It is used in starting of songs of related topic's. (Waiting of a lover for her beloved who has gone far away. Let me say, it is a part of native literature.
Mishaikh,
I have already read this post of yours :) Thank you for sharing this link.
Eva Thanks. For my answer to your question I would like you to refer to this blog of mine.
http://www.myenglishclub.com/profiles/blogs/kaga-crow. Sure you will enjoy it.
Mishaikh,
:) You wrote a poem, waaooow.
What is it with that crow, I noticed you often use it in this kind of writing.
I am not poem expert, but I think it is a good poem.
Thanks a lot bet.
Thanks Roman. That Part I have taken from my blog Kaga.
I am glad you like it.
Thanks Rose for such a nice poetic appreciation!
Nice!
Hi Rose! Your words are beautiful and inspiring! Thank you for sharing!
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