Today, I have a difficult subject and I'm really not good at it(All my classmates are afraid of it). It's so hart to get mark 9 for it but I did with a fortune. My teacher asked me a question that he had clarified in the last time and the problem's that he didnt miss that. So I not only had his compliment but also got a hight mark. My friend so envy me but I think that its because I was laborious. hehe
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Here's a writing tip:
You wrote: It's so hart to get mark 9 for it but I did "with a fortune".
A better way to write this is: It's so hard to get 9 marks for it, but "I was fortunate" to do it.
Then again...it sounds like your achievement was based on hard work, not luck! Thanks again for sharing. :)
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Here's a writing tip:
You wrote: It's so hart to get mark 9 for it but I did "with a fortune".
A better way to write this is: It's so hard to get 9 marks for it, but "I was fortunate" to do it.
Then again...it sounds like your achievement was based on hard work, not luck! Thanks again for sharing. :)