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I Feel You

Posted by Nadiyah on July 2, 2010

I Feel YouI feel you so so muchwarmth and tendernesso so so muchthe time you takeyour hand offI miss your touchI feel you so muchthough you're so farthe light in your eyesgive me directions towhere you areyou scentnever leavesyour breath ismy soul breezeo so so muchyour image greetsin the dark when the night comeswhen the morning awakesand realize when I neglectedI feel you so so much ...(Friday, July 2, 2010)an honor to me on your appreciation and comment here, thank you!-Nadiyah-
*special thanks to Sara L.Chapman and Faisal
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  • MEDITATION July 3, 2010 2:41
    your poem fully expresses your miss for her.
  • Nadiyah July 3, 2010 0:58
    Oh again! thanks for your correction, Vincent!
    I just want my poem is more beautiful with a beautiful background, if you can not read it clearly, you can click and you'll find it in larger size, thanks again friend!

    -Nadiyah-
  • vindos July 2, 2010 21:43
    I'm sorry but I find it hard to read all the letters because some of them melt with the bright colors of the rose ... maybe it is a way to make your poem more mysterious?
  • Nadiyah July 2, 2010 17:36
    Thank you melody, I want to share with you about my feelings

    -Nadiyah-
  • Nadiyah July 2, 2010 16:56
    you're welcome, Skoon. thank you for your kind words!
    I'm really like this photo too

    -Nadiyah-
  • Sharifa Bahri (SkoonAlBahr) July 2, 2010 16:53
    nice words. Thank you Nadiyah. Skoon.
  • Nadiyah July 2, 2010 16:53
    thank you for your appreciation, R.K. It's my feelings

    -Nadiyah-
  • dark_side July 2, 2010 16:21
    Nice poem. :)
  • Nadiyah July 2, 2010 16:14
    glad to know that you like it, soulmate Nebia!

    thank you for commenting here

    -Nadiyah-
  • Nebia July 2, 2010 15:58
    Very nice soulmate.
    I love it so so much.
    Bravo!
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