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I Feel You

Posted by Nadiyah on July 2, 2010

I Feel YouI feel you so so muchwarmth and tendernesso so so muchthe time you takeyour hand offI miss your touchI feel you so muchthough you're so farthe light in your eyesgive me directions towhere you areyou scentnever leavesyour breath ismy soul breezeo so so muchyour image greetsin the dark when the night comeswhen the morning awakesand realize when I neglectedI feel you so so much ...(Friday, July 2, 2010)an honor to me on your appreciation and comment here, thank you!-Nadiyah-
*special thanks to Sara L.Chapman and Faisal
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  • Nadiyah July 5, 2010 7:38
    this's my imaginary man, Karenina. it's my way when I want to wrote a poem
    I love this lovely photo. and I was glad when a friend gave me her permission to use it

    thanks for your warm comment, welcome!

    -Nadiyah-
  • Nadiyah July 4, 2010 1:22
    hello Vincent, thank you bunch!
    it's pleasure something I got a comment like that you put here. Your encouragement for me to be a new spirit, a great energy. thanks again!

    -Nadiyah-
  • vindos July 3, 2010 19:34
    Now I read everything, thanks! You are a very sensitive person, and you can send things that leave people thinking. Continue to write so much... the world needs people like you... thank you for sharing!
    Bye!
  • Nadiyah July 3, 2010 11:46
    Hello Adnan
    your comment make my confidence grow well ... it's one of my great feelings
    thank you so so much!

    -Nadiyah-
  • ADNAN July 3, 2010 11:42
    i really like your poetry
    its shows cool feeling
    thankx for sharing
    Regards
    ADNAN
  • Nadiyah July 3, 2010 11:18
    Hi dear Manuela,
    thank you for your kind words, it's an honor to me on your appreciation to my poems. yes, they are all my feelings.

    -Nadiyah-
  • Nadiyah July 3, 2010 6:19
    this's my lovely feeling, Nadira. in loneliness and solitude.
    I wanted to share with you ... thank you!

    -Nadiyah-
  • Nadiyah July 3, 2010 6:16
    Hi Meditation,
    each poem is my dreams, feelings and longings. Daily records are always written and I keep in my heart, thank you for your view.

    -Nadiyah-
  • Nadira July 3, 2010 3:39
    it s lovely poem nadiya h bringing out the loneliness and the ultimate of being with ones love
    thankyou for sharing it .
    nadira
  • Nadiyah July 3, 2010 0:58
    Oh again! thanks for your correction, Vincent!
    I just want my poem is more beautiful with a beautiful background, if you can not read it clearly, you can click and you'll find it in larger size, thanks again friend!

    -Nadiyah-
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