How I was saved:

How I was saved:

I was learning how to swim. I had never yet gone for a dive in the open sea. Then one day, I went to beach and took a plunge into the sea water. Before I knew I was in deep water. Suddenly a huge wave came and my body began to be dragged away. I tried to go back towards the shore but it was all useless. I was dragged away, as if a piece of iron was attracted by a magnet. Soon I lost all the control on my limbs and even on my mind. I could only scream. I was terribly frightened. My screams drew the attention of the people swimming around me. And moments later I felt that I was carried to shore but by then I had fainted. When I came to my senses I was in a hospital and the first person I saw was the doctor.

How one can't be saved:

The above story may also be considered as a metaphor for LOVE. One who does not know how to swim still find himself/herself drowning in to the deep sea. In this jump, it is not necessary that one has chance to scream like in the above story, and also not necessary that there would people around you to save you.

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  • Narin and JP, nice to read your comments.  Thanks a lot for kind attention.

  • Thank Blessing and Nimzaf for your nice comments.

  • I agree with Saba's comment.. you can not learn swimming without taking risk of drowned...

    thanks for sharing. 

  • @hayah

    'in you case was the saver a new beloved replaced the old beloved or what?'

    Hey it is enough to be bitten from a hole only once.  So how come there be another one!!!!!

    The wound of love never healed.  It, as it is said through out the literature of the world, gives sedation, life however goes on and one. 

  • @angel

    It's good you enjoyed your adventures with ocean waves.

    May you always enjoy the adventure with the love waves.

    And thanks for stopping at my place on your way of browsing EC.

  • Ap janta kiya hoowa Mishaikh? Main abi kum si kum, mumkin 56 sal, lakin main nahi janta tair. Alhamdulilah, you are ok.

  • Thanks Onee for the warning! So, yielding myself to the current............

  • Re-translated...lyrics of sufi philosopher.

    Don't go to the sea...

    I said to you "be careful!"...

    Don't go...!, don't go...!

    Now, you're gone...

    So, yield yourself to the current...

  • I thank you all for the kind attention and comment.

  • @saba, Afro & setareh:

    All the power/senses sometimes seized when on is going to plunge into the ocean of love, he even doesn't want to scread to save him, but wish to die.

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